Well, it's a relief to know she's not _actually_ pregnant. Now we can get all the humorous side of it with no worries.

Pffft, poor Fang, having to deal with her mood swings... XD

Oh, Angel...

Oh! Wow, I thought the story was gonna be longer - oh well; as a sort of extended one-shot, it was interesting and humorous.

By the way, I forgot if I asked you before, but have you read the graphic novel versions of the books? I actually kind of like them better than the books.

I will put "Angel's Story" next on my list of your fics to review. :)

Yay! I like seeing different perspectives in a story.

It's hard trying to comfort someone who can read minds...

LOL, I love Gazzy's outrage at his and Iggy's fine work with the explosives going unnoticed. And bizarre cravings are always funny.

Heh, Max's sarcasm is amusing me...

Leave it to Nudge to be argued out of a fight because of a recent manicure. XD

More fun Max sarcasm! You write it well. :)

What book is this?

hmmm...if that dart didn't make Max faint,then i wonder what it had inside?i have a feeling it may be important later on...

This was hilarious! I think you should make it longer though.

LOVE IT especially the end!

funny ending

i think it would be highlarious [i know its spelled wrong!] if they shot Max again,then trick them into thinking the symtoms wre real!

Fnickin' a**! that was Funny!

ANGEL!

WHAT?

Love your style of writing. Pls update soon!

another chappie pwease!

cool i lickt it keep riting i will read and rivew som more