Crazy sweet. Better than a magic trick. Do it again!

Some of the best stories come from the eyes of someone else. You prove it-magnificently.

Awww! I love this one even more! Your Max is amazingly awesome, I just want to hug him. The ending was just so sweet; now I'm grinning like a fool. I love how it connected back to the first memory, which I also adored, because who doesn't love cute little kids playing house (especially love how Alex was the dad and she made Justin be the mom... XD) and pretending to get married! Your Max character really shown through in this piece, and his views on the Justin/Alex relationship are just so precious. Wonderful, wonderful piece.

*"This is my brother, Max," Alex introduces, grinning up at her newest boyfriend. "And this is Justin."*

You got so well their relationship :) !

There have been things really close to that in the tv show, despite the fact it's on Disney Channel !

i love max's pov! great story, you have talent :)

well awkward! you dont even need to say it to know whats going on! haha :) nice one maxiie :)

This was wonderful and amazing and something I could read again. Which I will!

-curledruler

I went back to read your Peter/Susan fics, but then I found your Justin/Alex collection... needless to say, I'm a very happy camper right now. Great Jalex from Max's point of view. I'll be reading more!

Oh-I loved this!

I love Max! This was great! :)

I actually really liked that! Gosh, I just have to admit that I read Jalex and get over it, haha! 'Cause seriously? That was amazing!

Bloody perfect. Nuff said.

So I loved this. Like, LOVED this. You've got everything so structured and perfect and in-character (especially Max; you captured his uncool coolness so easily!), it's all so wonderful and I ADORED this fic. I don't know what to say and this was amazing and I sound like an idiot and I'll give you some reasons why I loved this so much.

5 Lines I Loved:

1. Justin takes an angry step forward and slaps Alex's hands away. "You're not marrying Max." (I loved this because it's so very JUSTIN, showing how he feels but NOT showing it, not realizing it.)

2. And Justin's hands instantly wrap around Alex's arm, hauling her back. ...not even a brief hesitation, nope. (Holy FREAKING canole. That line just took my breath away, because love's always been like a subconscious thing with me, and wowowowowow, total awesomeness right there.

3. "And this is Justin." Also her brother, Max should probably add, but doesn't. (Wowza. Two words: SO. ALEX.)

4. Magic is the only thing Max has ever loved. (So I was mostly concentrating on the JustinAlex portion of this fic but this line made my bottom lip wobble and just totally change my views on everything Max in WOWP. I always thought Justin should win the tournament but you just changed and ohmigod, that line was fabulous.)

5. The whole entire freaking last part. Gah-gah-gah-gah-gah GAH. That was ah-mazing, perfectomundo, magnificent, fantastic, and I dunno what else to say other than this was EPIC.

So those were only five lines I liked. If I wrote down every line I liked, I would just copy the whole fic and paste it onto this review. Again, FANTASTIC fic. (: Loved it, adored it, favoriting it.

This was beautiful and heart-wrenching I nearly cried, I especially liked what Max said at the end *wink*

I just wanted to say that, I think, you got Alex's personality dead on at the end. That's my favorite thing about this fic, I could totally picture Alex saying what she does when Max figures it out. I've read your other (completed) stories as well, and I'm very impressed at how you're able to capture Alex's (and Justin's) personality so well. I think it would be perfectly accurate (to me anyways) to say that you're the best jalex author on here because of your ability to keep them so well in character.