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cjonbloodletter
2009-12-23 . chapter 7
Black Lagoon and Happosai... I think I love you
cartoons68
2009-12-21 . chapter 7
Yay! UPDATE!!

I didn't expect to see so much of Happosai's adventures in Roanpur. That said VERY entertaining!!Will Balalaika attempt to recruit Ranma to deal with ol' happy,could be fun.

Ranma + Senshi getting bogged down with youma attacks,I was expecting the Enemy to use better tactics like when they split the enemy up earlier or maybe using hordes of mind controlled civilians to wear them down or even an ambush of coordinated well chosen complimentary powered youma to break them!Oh, well when the nerima crew prove insufficient back-up I hope they call Hellsing first.

Beryl alive and held by a TSAB-esque group of bad guys...COOL! I hope their actions draw Ranma & co to Mahora. Having Evangeline retrain them in her time-distorting Resort could really pick-up their abilities.

I really like this Chapter it gives this Fic so much potential direction!!
Random832
2009-12-21 . chapter 7
Wait... Did you say Wales? As in Cardiff? As in rift?
Kariston Draconis
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
Hm... the plot thickens. Beryl's still around?
Bobboky
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
excellent
shanejayell
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
HAPPOSAI and BLACK LAGOON?!

*dies*

Oh lord, That's gonna be interesting.
AngelForm
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
Love the image of Vita puzzling over why her attack did nothing. If memory serves the only times Yunno’s shield have been breached are when Nanoha developed her five cartage barrier breaker and when Nanoha Fate and Hayate all unloaded everything they had at once. His offence might by non-existent but his defence

I almost feel sorry for those crime lords. They do not know who they are dealing with.

Ryoga trying to get his pig form into fighting shape?

Wonder who the guys at the end were. They sound a bit like the TSAB but that does not fit. We shall see.
Gundum M
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
nice chapter, part with the bad guy was a bit confuseing though
Tikigod784
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
and Negima takes to the stage. A side-story with Evangeline, eh? Fantastic...

And Black Lagoon too... heh. I wanted to see Revy's reaction, predictable as it might be...

Another fantastic chapter. Nice work!
HolyKnight5
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
a Techno-Magi Invasion against Earth!?...seems that the Journey will end...and the Awakening of Earth, as their world its introduced to other nastiness all around will explode at some point. Oddly, the names on the last part remind me of Ancient Belka names and such...it may be a civilization born from remanants of the Holy Mage Knights of the the Ancient Belka Kingdom??
Ghost in the Machine
2009-12-20 . chapter 7
Someone already pointed out the Happosia/Happosai thing, which should only take a couple of minutes to correct. (I love the chapter update feature on ff dot net. I'm just surprised that more people don't take advantage of it.) But I can't really see the purpose to his story thread, considering what you reveal at the end of the chapter. If the Roanapur crew can't handle Happi, then what use will they be to the main conflict? (Other than comic relief or -maybe- foot-soldiers.) Good progress seems to be being made on other fronts. I do wonder what Ryoga will have come up with if he makes an appearance. Rambling. Willshut up now.
Anon
2009-12-19 . chapter 7
Now things are getting interesting. Our heroes are going to need TSAB's orbital support, or really big guns soon though.
Mackon
2009-12-19 . chapter 7
Ranma was a bit harsh talking about Shampoo wasn't he? I'm bit surprised Ranma would even consider Mousse as a useful ally here and very surprised that he'd pick him over Shampoo as help.

Anyway apart from the dealings with the Amazons this was a great chap, enjoyed the Lagoon parts immensely.

Thanks for sharing.
quickshot0
2009-12-19 . chapter 7
Well... things are turning odd now... is part of TSAB getting up to no good or something? hard to say I guess... and you'd think Beryl dead by this point of time, no? Alternate version, some how survived? And also dragging in the Negima universe mages ehh... those actually do have Magitech and are based on Mars to boot, though under quite a high level ward. Guess they wouldn't notice. Well what ever is exactly going on, things are probably going to get really really complicated very quickly.
Tombadgerlock
2009-12-19 . chapter 7
oh!

A Plot!

Is that a Original Magitech verse?
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