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Reviews for: The Deathbed Scene
Dawn Run
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
hahahahahahahahahaha...very good...I 'll admit, I was wondering at the start, but you tied it up very nicely at the end...nice one!
;)
Jomorox
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
I really loved the last line- very effective for those who know the book.

It was cleverly done with the idea that he thinks she's dead and then is relieved when he wakes up only to discover that she's missing.

Nice job!
karmencorn
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
Nicely done.
Thank you!
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