Really good take on the disappearance of Sparkplug! Well written too. Well done.

The cheese was adorable, and definitely a nice way to cheer up after the depression caused by the rest of the fic. X3

Also, you just gave me a reason to dislike Sparkplug, despite my usually being one of the minority of tf-fans that doesn't hate human charas on principle...

(Oh, and random note: You left your "/lj-cut" in there after the ~Fin~. XD )

I like this very much. It's one way of explaining why Sparkplug mysteriously disappeared in season 3.

Fantastic story~ A very creative idea, and very well written. Sparkplug's reaction was very realistic, as was Spike's~ You kept everyone very in-character as well~

The idea of Bumblebee talking like a woman made my day, though~ X3

That was interesting. I like the idea of Spike/Carly/Bumblebee, and I really haven't seen much of it. Also, I think Sparkplug's reaction here is realistic given when the series was set.

LOLing at "I can assure him that there is no way for Carly’s fetus to be mine."