Aw this was beautiful yet sad.I wish it was Riff she was with not Tiger but she didn't want to be a single parent so her baby could have a father which I think I would want too so I understand the shotgun wedding...you are a great writer LC

*Sniff, sniff* So, so sad, but so, so good! Gah, why are you such a good author? XD But really, this is absolutely wonderful! Superb job :)

Aww =(
Poor, Graz, Poor Tiger. Excellent fic as always, LC!
But still... poor Graz.

Ok, I can't even explain how honoured I am to have such RIDICULOUSLY TALENTED friends. Like, LC, you are NEVER allowed to ever talk down your writing again, because this was completely beautiful. I loved the details, about the cheap wedding and the brdiemaid dresses and everyong trying to so hard to make Graz happy when Graz really might never be happy again. I loved the descriptions of the four bridesmaids and Velma and how each of them had a slightly different reaction to the proceedings. And this was my favourite line:

"And then the veil is gently draped over her head and smothers out what little fire she had left in her, and now she is nothing but dying embers."

SO BEAUTIFUL. You are amazing, this is amazing. GAH.

OH. GAHH. SNIFF. WHY, GRAZ, WHY?! I mean, of course I know why, but--sniff. You've made this so beautifully sad and lovely and heartbreaking. Kudos for a fantastic job, my dear twinnie. This made me tear up. I love the contrast between the way she'd planned it with Riff and the way it is with Tiger, and the details about the bridesmaid dresses and I LOVE FRED and the night before the wedding and just the anguished feeling about the whole thing and Graz's last-minute doubts, and the hands not fitting and oh, LC, this is just too beautiful. Sniff. Fan-fucking-tastic job, my dear.