wprst deal ever i dont think hinata would go that far

This would've been a good story if it weren't for the kid and having Naruto be so .-. Quite the Naruto I know would've punched the kid on the head for saying the things she said to him...shame.
Other than that its a good story line.

"Because he cannot. With your permission, Lady Tsunade, one of my team, Hanae Ariakado, can be made aware of the situation and placed on a solitary mission for that thirty day period. You are aware of her abilities, I think."

Uhhh, couldn't the Kyuubi just run past her to the village? He doesn't actually have to come in contact with her...

I think you're really under-powering Kyuubi-Naruto, or overpowering Hanae... "Your chakra is useless around me. You have only your strength and agility." - there's no fucking way Hanae can keep up with the speed and strength of a Kyuubi empowered Naruto, let alone a normal Naruto when she threatened to kill him. Just because when his chakra comes into contact with her's it becomes useless doesn't mean she has the power to completely stop the Kyuubi. With his far greater speed and strength he could easily defeat her in a fist(claw) fight alone, no need to use chakra claws etc...

OH, I'm so glad I decided to read this(I'm a lazy reader)! It was great! The only criticism is for me, and only because of how lame I reacted to Hinata and naru/kyu's lack of food. Anyways, Good work!

Great story, realy like it! :D

An interesting premise, with the motif of "menage a troi" cemented in the end, something i found amusing. I am tempted to read the original story, just to parallel what you've done. Thank you for keeping the masochism to a tasteful degree with Hinata.

What a cocky little bitch, this Hanae...

i think this is going so well im enjoying this! ;)

oh wow this seem different then what I have read be4 i think i may like this plot of urs!

A beautiful story with beautiful ending yet. Though I wish there's another epilogue showing how they fare next year, it is still a lovely story.

MmMmm wonder how would her bloodline do against the Sharingan's various powers? Like the Tsukuyomi or that black flame?

yep...alcohol does the stuff :D:D:D believe me ;) I've seen it :D I cant wait to see what is Hinata going to dooooo...and I hope Kyuubi doesnt do anything funny,or dangerous...Pff..Of ocurse he will ! HE's Kyuubi for crying out loud!

I'm starting to like this Hanae chick :D awesome story,by the way ;)

You have no idea how many points you just scored for the Labyrinth quote. Just saying ()