This fic is so awesome! Totally
I reckon they should take human mirage back to the base, tell the others about it, then take human mirage back to the warehouse with a camera installed somewhere on him. Then fake mirage shows up at the base and they send him out on patrol. Then they watch the camera on human mirage and try to figure out what to do next... That's as far as i got!

Are you going to continue this?

AWESOME i'm glad you finally posted this. When you first told me the idea you seemed hesitant but good work.

There were a few words where you were missing spaces like leavingthe, respondand...

It's kind of sad that Hound had to create a holo-Mirage in order to have a conversation with him. All lot of this was pretty confusing, but I think it's because I'm tired and I don't want to think.

I like this story.

I kind of want them to make it back to the ark and kick the fake Mirage's butt. Though, if you went the other route, the story would be inevitably longer...

Oh my Primus! PLEASE CONTINUE! -squeals-

great story so far! :D I think that they should make it back to the ark so that human mirage can kick his doubles aft :D