Aww Arthur's so cute! I was hoping this was going to finish with a happy Merthur ending but yours was just as good :D

This is very sweet. Jealous Arthur is sad but rather adorable and it's nice to see him being the one worrying over an oblivious Merlin rather than the other way around for once.

This story made me so happy! In an I-feel-really-bad-for-Arthur kind of way, if that makes sense. But I totally picked up on the jealousy in the episode, so I'm so glad someone wrote a story about it!

That was so sweet.

Ah jealousy is a bitch... one which obviously makes Arthur blind, funny that *gg*

Cute and funny Arthur getting jealous... lol.

cute...

I like how you use what happens in the episode as a background for Arthur's feelings, and, since it is from Arthur's POV, the irony is impressive and a bit funny, in a poor Arthur kind of way.

Poor jealous Arthur! :(

But he doesn't feel that way about Morgana, so it's ok...at least I don't think he does...hm...

aww and then he goes and marrys two timing gwen. Arthurs life sucks in so many ways

I *love* the way you incorporate whole chunks of script into the text. I mean, that really could be what Arthur was thinking throughout the episode, and you gave it voice perfectly. I think I might take this and make it part of my personal cannon, if you don't mind ;)

Aww, I really enjoyed this - you have a great grip on Arthur's character.

Interesting :)

haha love this, and yes i agree, Arthur was so adorably jealous 3

I love this! It's so true, it could very well have been what Arthur was thinking in the actual episode C: You picked up perfectly on everything that was there without having to fabricate anything new - wonderful.