I am almost crying!
This is so sad.
*shakes head, trying to shake off the feeling*

Poor fictional Cody Jackson and everybody else that is also fictional, but somehow manage to be so sad and make me so sad.

Very nice writing skill, but I do agree with WOODLAWNIAN, it can be a little too Soap Opera-esque.

i was crying throughout this whole thing!!
i did not see this coming!!
AMAZING! it really shows the dangers of gang violence.
i was laughing though when it said:Nathan was next to her, his hair bushier than ever. lol
but its so sad!! great job!
i cant wait to read more of your stories!!

i am so scared right now, i dont even want to know what happens.
great chapter
im so nervous!

aww im so happy dallas is being nice to him!!
i was so scared when it said cody jackso-! i thought he was gonna write n!
great job!

you are making me cry!!
another amazing chapter!
i feel so bad! great job! i cant wait to see what happens!!

aww!
this is so sad!!
great job!!

im about to cry!!
this is so sad!!
amazing job!

Hm . . . so I suppose this would be like what happens to those scary people I used to hide from.
Interesting.

Well, anyway, you write well. It seems to be a little exaggerated, but, yeah.
Anyway, keep on writing!

Just . . . try not to make your work too much like a Soap Opera.

Poor, poor fictional Jackson . . .

Hi

Sorry I've never reviewed before. But the story plot is really good. I love the parent and child relationship between Jackson and Dallas. However, you need to make it more like a story not just like a script with random bits of desciption. And don't tell people sraight out stuff, like in the flashback, I mean yes it's powerful and scary stuff, but you could really enhance the story by allowing the reader to really get inside Jackson's head with more with more description and not telling the reader flat out what's going on.

It's a good story line though and this review is meant to help you.

D-Queen

P.S please when you have the chance check out my stiry, Unspoken Love and review it too. It might help give you an idea of what I mean for more detail. Thanks

aww
i loved this chapters title. it fit perfectly.

oh my god!!
cliffhanger!
i love it!

Man, you know how to give someone that sick, sinking feeling it their stomach from suspense. When my heart attack comes, you're to blame.

Great work.

NO!
I HATE THIS PART!!
great job!!

that sucks
i hope he doesn't get in trouble!!

aww!! i feel so bad when he drinks the milk!
great chapter!