 Monkey D Dragon 2009-12-02 . chapter 11this is one of the best stories that i have read all year keep it up and update as soon as humanly possible because i can't wait to see what happens next |
 jd 2009-11-30 . chapter 11 Hmm should we add this to the list of abandoned fics? |
 Dr. Sweetz 2009-11-29 . chapter 11hey this is a great story! please update soon. can you tell me when you plan on updating? |
 captuniv 2009-11-27 . chapter 11Ooh, what a setup! We're going to see Luke arrive to begin his battle with Darth Vader then Camelot arriving to battle the Imperial Forces, then Harry arrives to help Luke defeat Darth Vader and turn him back to the Light Side of the Force and make him Anakin again. Should be a hoot! Then Harry returns to his own dimension to thwart Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Keep it coming!! |
 aback 2009-11-25 . chapter 11the alloy that harry got in the babylom universe that he used in his ship aborve energi, that metal can be use in the acturus project to absorve the exotic particlos? |
 Harriverse 2009-11-24 . chapter 11The scope of this is just incredible! |
 Don M 2009-11-24 . chapter 11 I have been fascinated by this story. I like the crossovers, very interesting use of many story lines to create a cohesive project. The section on Babylon 5 seemed a bit preempted and like there was a bit more you wanted to say, but overall a very interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens to Harry and Yoda in the future. Good luck |
 Firefox 2009-11-23 . chapter 11 I think you should have Harry get the plans for the Star Forge from KOTOR. That way it would make it easier for him to produce equipment like armor, weapons, droids, and larger ships like Star Destroyers. Also if he were to go to the Star Trek Universe it would be cool if he were to infiltrate a Borg Cube and download the entire Borg database. Think of the weapons, shields, and ship designs that thing has to hold. |
 nxkris 2009-11-20 . chapter 11nice chapter. i hope you have harry stick around for a bit, deal with DSII and emperor maybe. you should also consider around the time you end this story, have harry set up an inter-universal gateway so that the three universes can interact, trade, and help defend each other. update soon. |
 cooldamien 2009-11-17 . chapter 11I wish to read more I love it. |
 Glacarius 2009-11-16 . chapter 11impressive story i cant wait for more |
 Sephiroth-omega 2009-11-16 . chapter 11 Hi, cool chapter as usual. Though I have a few questions/sugestions.
Will Harry build a version of the Death Star?
If yes he could build a smaller version with his technology but without a Superlaser. He could use the Superlaser dish as a Landingplatform for Camelot. This is so that he has more defensive and production capabilitys. He could have giant fabricators where he could produce ships anmas, and also have a few prefabricated bases/stations (Mining stations for space and ground, defence satelites, etc) in hangars there, ready for deployment.
Will Harry trade/buy/steal or copie the Cloning tech?
If yes he could combine the SW version of cloning with the Ancient version and have manpower so that he isnt alone (they are loyal to him alone). But he should make it so that not all clones are the same (take 10 or so bloodsamples from different people and mix the dna so that the results are different). This way he could recreate the Alteran race and maybe solve the problems the Asgard have so that he could trade that info for help or so.
Will Harry go to the Battlestar Galactica dimension?
If yes will he get the resurection tech and the tech to produce human form cylons? He could use this as alternate form of cloning (or combine the two forms) for the Asgard.
You could also put this in the Stargate Dimension and combine those two, or it could be in a Dimension where Earth has been destroyd.
Hope a new chapter comes soon and those ideas help you.
Sephiroth-omega
PS: Maybe some of those suggestions will be seen in Future chapters. |
 fraewyn 2009-11-16 . chapter 11Continue to hold my adoration, this story does |
 Zealot 2009-11-16 . chapter 11 Well, nice chapter.
The good things:
1. Harry finally starts using his metaphysical powers, though they have much much much... more potential then he is currently using (just watch the space expansion, shrinking, enlarging or the Room of Requirement). If you need a focus for Harry, he should make himself a ring, or better yet, implant something in his body.
2. The adapting of the Vaapad lifestyle. That will hopefully reduce the angsty bitching and whining in the future.
3. You didn't mention Ginny.
4. Harry is not bitching about the fact that he has to let people die in the conflict between the Empire and the Rebels.
5. Harry is going to return to his birth reality, hopefully you will deal with the shit there very fast. Seriously, the wizards are sorely responsible for their own problems. Hopefully Harry realises that as things are going, there will be another Dark Lord within 30 years of Voldemort's demise. In my opinion Harry should create a virus that would prevent beings from using magic. They have already shown repeatedly that they can't be trusted to have so much power over reality. It's like someone gave some agrarian society high-tech and only the lack of real understanding of the power prevents them to blow themselves up.
Also, I really hope, I beg you: don't pair Harry with any canon characters! They just don't have the same frame of reference, or any similiar interests or anything in common at all! Also, please don't have people downloading the repository into their brain left and right, it would make the story just stupid.
The bad things:
1. You need someone to check your grammar in the first half of the chapter. It was TERRIBLE. The spelling of the words is mostly correct, but you need to learn when to use words like with, from, as, by... Also, the repetitive use of the word "barrier"... The second half was acceptable. |
 sh777 2009-11-16 . chapter 11Thanks for the update. Look forward to the coming ones. |