 NarutoMinamino 2009-11-30 . chapter 5No! No there isn't any more after this! Please write more! I need to know what happens! :D
(If you couldn't tell that I LOVED it by that, let me say it again. I loved it!) |
 DreamFreak336 2009-11-29 . chapter 5this is so good!! |
 Pirate-chan 2009-11-20 . chapter 5very inventive- the setting, the use of the characterization, and so much more! i can haz nxt chappie tres soon, s'il vous plait? |
 criminalmindsfreak03 2009-11-20 . chapter 5OMG so cute and hot. I cannot wait for an update. |
 hanyou-elf 2009-11-18 . chapter 5i knew you would do an amazing job with it! you captured the scene, the ambiance of the scene perfectly! the intimacy of the situation, the newness of it for reid in morgan's capable hands. i love pen's song choice, perfect for the situation, perfect for her boy and her boy's beau, and for the love they're about to explore.
i love the interaction between derek and penelope. it's so cute! it's far and away in the realm of passionate brother and sister, and it's everything they are in the show. they're so cute, so perfect together, it's scary what they could accomplish. penelope was so setting them up. she's going to be instrumental in their relationship, hm. already she's making a run for the money.
and ohs... the taxi scene. the only way it would have been better would be if derek had kissed him. how delicious that would have been. i would have probably squeed a little bit. but, the hint and the promise of more is so exciting in and of itself. i can't wait to see how their relationship progresses, how the lion is sated with spencer beside him. all perverted implications standing.
keep it up, this fic is only getting better and better. |
 Monsterchild 2009-11-18 . chapter 5Please update soon! I love this story so much! |
 sue 2009-11-16 . chapter 4 i love this story and hope for more ... |
 RebootUniverse 2009-11-14 . chapter 4I've been reading this story n LJ, and I've never had the chance to review it. I think this is really interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter. AU's like this aren't usually my favourite, but you're doing it really well and I'm eager to see what happens with Morgan and Reid. Keep it up :D |
 Monsterchild 2009-11-13 . chapter 4I'm so glad that you updated! I'm loving this story! Please update again soon! |
 hanyou-elf 2009-11-12 . chapter 4yeah... so i'm reading this on livejournal (where i happened to stumble across it in the morgan/reid community) and i loved it.
your prose is incredibly structured. you offer visuals that are beautiful and wonderfully rendered. and you offer a characterization that is greatly rendered.
i feel like i know these characters well, even though they are different from the ones we've been introduced to in the series. you write them so familiarly, they feel familiar to the readers. your story telling ability is a gift and it's displayed perfectly here. i love the way you handled them, and i can't wait to see what happens.
i'm looking forward to the interaction between morgan and reid for the after party, hopefully it'll get a bit naughty. there is great potential for something sweet while pen is singing.
and how awesome that pen is a singer! she does enjoy a lot of attention, and i love that she gets to have something that gives her that. and morgan as a boxer is sexy. he's a physical man and he enjoys physical activities and i love that he's a boxer. and reid, reid just compliments him. like he's supposed to be.
i eagerly anticipate more of this story. i hope you'll update quickly.
thank you for writing it, and i'm sorry it doesn't have more reviews. it's absolutely beautiful. |
 Monsterchild 2009-10-21 . chapter 1This story has been amazingly written. And OBVIOUSLY there is more to come. I mean, it would just be cruel to end it there. So, please update soon! |