Willow as a vampire, nice... I liked that "it was just a dream" twist. great story!

Boy, there's something I hate about dream sequences and I'm starting to realize what it is. This story is just too confusing. It's hard to follow all the twists and turns of it. It just doesn't make sense at all.

eekk what was real and what wasn't? this is good never would I want to read this on Halloween.

Please continue!

That is so long! It took me almost the whole day to read this story! Please make shoter stories!

It was great! I want more.