Brilliant.
Could you PLEASE continue? I love uber much. This will be so interesting and spectacular! PLease and thank you !

Happy reading, writing, living.

Terra

I love this story so far. It has a very unique storyline one you don't see very often. I hope you keep writing

I difinitly like this better than the other one.

really good can't wait to read more

Woot! That put some awesome sauce on my epic steak!

i like this story so far. I can't wait to read more

Loving it, just found it and I keeping myself from reading the first draft so all this is new! UPdate soon please!

I like it is pretty funky and funny it also
shows that Paul is actually very lonely and his behaviour is à cry for helpp
i do want to know if you are going to update this story often cause i was dissapoonted when you didnt update THE other story anymore

this is really good so far deffinatly written better than the other one so please UPDATE SOON!!

Ok as you well know I LOVED IT! im your eternal fan!!
i was gonna ask about the red eyes cause i have an albino friend and his eyes are brown but u explained it at the end! :D
Its been so long! and u always comeback with a mindblowing fic!
Im so buying ur book when it comes out!!
hehe if mine ever gets published im so sending it to u!
CANT WAIT FOR UPDATES ON ANY OF UR FICS!! ^^

I love the start. Can't wait to read more.

Okay, this is criticism and I hope I don't offend you, but I think this story was much better before, when you left out the racial issue. I know you want to raise awareness, but honestly it annoys me. My opinion is that issues like this should be left out of fanfiction and left to an author's profile. I don't think I'll be reading the rewrite, I'm sorry. I hope I don't sound like I'm mad and I hope you continue in your endeavor but I personally don't read stuff like this. Don't let this discourage you though! Your writing style is amazing, spelling, grammar all very very good.

finally the first chapter !
i've been waiting foe this chapter for ages!
i cant wait till u post the sec one:)
-gressa.cullen

lovin' the re-write :)
Update Soon!

Great start!