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Kyry
2009-12-26 . chapter 2
HAHHAHA! This is one of the best I've read on this particular topic/challenge thing =D
Very good writing. Very good plot. And very little bad grammer for me to pick on ^_^

About the numnuts below; ignore them completely. The point of the jump through the window was not to provide lesbian-themed hotness (though it was undoubtedly hott to imagine and she obviously fails as a lesbian), but to reflect on Kim's animalistic tendencies (later to be revealed I assume).

More please?!
Beah
2009-11-25 . chapter 2
K, first of all, to the review below mine, how bout you read the second chapter before you cut the cheese like that? But that's a pointless thing to say since you don't seem to have a sense of humor.

I think the story's funny and even though some special people who read chapter two didn't get it, it's obviously a werewolf story. By the way! I think a naked woman coming in my window is hot, and last time I checked, I had a vagina. Anyway, awesome, funny story!
Fraxinus Dipetala
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
That was terrible. Awful. Awful. Awful. I thought it actually might be an okay read... right up until that window part. OF CHAPTER ONE.
You are a man? You have to be. Because even in my Lesbian mind, a naked girl jumping through my window to fight me because she was jealous of another naked girl (who is completely unlikely to even be involved in a story like this)

is. not. hot.
You know what it is?
It's retarded.
Black Fang 02
2009-11-20 . chapter 2
Wow! I love it! Update soon. I wanna see if shego goes ballistic.
RT
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
awesome story Please update ASAP!
squirrelz
2009-11-17 . chapter 1
"Shego blinked, too speechless to react any other way. Kimmie had just burst into her bedroom, naked, gloriously, deliciously (BAD THOUGHTS, VERY BAD, I’LL GO TO SPECIAL HELL KIND OF THOUGHTS) naked and just pimp slapped her. And it kind of hurt."

i laughed so fucking hard at that. it's not even funny, i was rolling on the floor foaming at the mouth. coughing something that prob'ly only vaguely sounded like"I CAN'T BREATHE! CORN! I CAN'T FRIGGIN' LLAMAS BREATHE!"

I liked this story. *cough*
KiGofan
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
what the hell?
she's a DOG?! D:<
...*sigh* well whatever.
finish the damn story.
WickedandWonderful
2009-11-16 . chapter 2
Hahahahaha! This story is awesome! Please update ASAP!
Uffiee
2009-11-15 . chapter 2
deng.
stevielicous
2009-11-15 . chapter 2
woah! :D
Elphie-Not-Fae
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
Too lazy to log in :) But this is a good story, update soon because I've got a lot of questions I need to be answered!
Daryl
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
update soon. i need to read more
ShadowCub
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
I kinda figured it out, great!
Weres are my favorite monster.
df
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
hahaha good story - i hope you update again soon - very awesome fic
Nutpyro
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
Wow you're good. That was totally unexpected. Its awesome.
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