Hi! Grizly story. The characterization is well drawn.I like the element about the dynamics between Silas, Methos and Kronos, and how Caspian used to play with it.

Nitpicks: you have a few sentences there that just run on, and where I feel a comma or a period separating the sentence elements would make reading much easier. And you change tempus a few times during the story from past to present and back, which makes reading hard, too. Do you have run this by a beta reader? Cleaning that up would make the story even more impressive, in my view.

All in all, great character study of Caspian. Thank you for writing and sharing!