cheesy maybe, but nonetheless a fantastic piece of fiction :)

Absolutely adored it! The character development, inside jokes and breaking of the fourth wall were all just very nicely pieced together. This is going in my favorites.

Ah~ I love it! Thank you so much for writing this for my birthday; to be honest, I rarely get unexpected presents (my parents tell me what they're going to get me beforehand) so this was a gigantic treat for me to read. ^^

After reading this, I'm tempted to write a Misa fic. Except it has to be Light/Misa. I used to ship L/Misa but Light/Misa needs more love. Go figure.

I really like this little story! It incorperates morals, actual character depth, and fairytale very well. I thought the ending was sweet too; not what I was really expecting, but I still found it charming. Thank God you didn't make it the same old Happily Ever After with Misa and Ryuuzaki,(though I admit I'm fond of the pairing myself)they could be very good friends in the anime/manga if circumstances were a little different.

Over all, it was a wonderful read and I hope Huajen Chan (or Michelle C.H. Zhu) will be impressed and pleased with it.