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plbsgirl
2009-12-16 . chapter 8
This is an amazing story. Your time and effort show in the completed project. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with us.
MaeSilverpaws1
2009-12-11 . chapter 8
Great story!
Binka
2009-12-11 . chapter 8
Very well thought out theory, brilliantly written and thoroughly compelling. It's been an emotional eight chapters and at times I wasn't sure how it was going to end, but you've left me with a huge smile on my face, so all the worry was worth it. Oh, and I found the use of the elder wand to negate the Azkaban antimagic a wonderful idea, it's been the cause of so much bloodshed and misery that it's almost fitting it should repair some of that damage, symbolic in a way. I do wonder how they'll neutralise the other concentrations of antimagic though, perhaps have an anual collection in which citizens of the wizarding community donate unwanted magical objects? This at least would help to slow down the growth of the antimagic and give the unspeakables and scientists time to research a more efficient method of dispelling it. Sorry, I just love over analysing. Thanks ever so much for this story, it's been a pleasure.
sweet-tang-honney
2009-12-11 . chapter 8
great chapter.
Tentrees
2009-12-11 . chapter 8
Solve the problems and move on. Don't let them fester.
twilight's reflection
2009-11-23 . chapter 7
As always, very well written and very interesting. I look forward to reading the rest very much =].
sweet-tang-honney
2009-11-23 . chapter 7
great chapter.
SinDoll
2009-11-23 . chapter 7
This story continues to be an amazing read.
Its definitely under appreciated!
A great plot as well as an interesting look into an alternative theory behind why the classes are so small then the typical pureblood in-breeding business.
I always look forward to the next update.
Tentrees
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
This is an absolutly facinating read.

Imagine cast a hundred pratronus charms into a structured form, a ball of silica gel perhaps. Ten pratronus charms cast into the matrix of the gel to be trapped by the crystals by ten strong wizards/witches.

Then lobbing the gel ball into a mass of anti-magic. Bring life back to magic cast the dark out with good strong emotions. And especially teach the generations of magic users the price of using Dark Magic without balance. The End of all magic everywhere.

Love the story and hope you keep going.

Lob the bones of a dragon into the ball, the wands of criminals and old wands of the dead (make this more palitable by saying that the wand should never be used by a lesser mage and that magick is from the earth and must be returned too the earth to begin the cycle of renewal). Have the anti-magic concentrations bombarded with old dark artifacts confiscated by the Ministry.

Pragmaticaly use the anti-magic to strip long term magical criminals (murders, rapists and slavers, etc.) of their magic, charm their memories and drop them out of the magical world into the British penal system. Then through their wand into the anti-magic to balance the two acts.

This whole thing just reminded me of the Law of equivilant exchanges from Full Metal Alchemy. Bu the idea of a cycle in all things and a need for balence is a constant theme in the wisdom of humanity.

Write more soon.
walks-with-nose-in-book
2009-11-12 . chapter 6
dun dun dun! haha, write soon please! the suspense is killing me!
sweet-tang-honney
2009-11-07 . chapter 6
great chapter.
Entertained Reader
2009-11-05 . chapter 5
I find your stories to be very refreshing and I'm very happy that such a capable author is writing well-thought tales on a place like .

Actually I was so anxious to read the next chapter that when I had to hand over the computer I attempted to print out your chapters to read. Sadly there was no more paper. So I thought I could get some old paper and print on the backs of those. Then the printer broke and after frantic internet searching for solutions and threats to said printer, I gave up and read the chapters on my tiny phone. That being said, I like your stories.

Please continue writing. :)
sweet-tang-honney
2009-10-24 . chapter 5
great chapter.
walks-with-nose-in-book
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
haha, a bunch of little prongsies. lol. very good job, cant wait to read the rest
sweet-tang-honney
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
loved it.
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