I love how you wrote Dinah. She understands Oliver and will give him a hard time with his ridiculous behavior. The other League members teasing her in each chapter was a great touch too. The Pretty Bird nickname is nice. The last chapter is my favorite with a real conversation between Dinah and Oliver.

I love that even though Dinah specifically tells him he's not going to change the subject, he still manages to. And he called her Pretty Bird! That just makes me squee.

Awesome job on all of this, it was a wonderful idea and I can't imagine it being pulled off any better. The world, especially the Smallville world, needs more Diniver and I'm glad you're up to providing it.

I love the Marathon Girl thing, it's just so perfect for Dinah and Oliver's relationship. And, pointing out that Ollie drinks more when Tess is around? Thank you! She is not good for him and he needs to recognize that.

My favorite part of this one has to be the light banter between the two of them. So often we see the League and they're in the middle of a mission, no joking allowed (unless it's from Impulse). It's nice to see them more at ease, if only for a few minutes.

Great story so far, you've written everyone completely in character. I loved this chapter, I actually ship Oliver/Tess (as well as Oliver/Dinah obviously) but I think Dinah's opinion's of Tess's are exactly as I imagined. Can't wait for an update, hope you continue your Dinah series. There aren't many good multi-chaptered Smallville fics out there but yours are one of them :)

This story is really awesome so far. I loved how Dinah and Clark's conversation mirrored the talk that Lois and Ollie had in Bride.

I like these! Cute!

As much as I love Diniver, my favorite part of this was the Chlois. Dinah calling Clark out was just too perfect and his denial was perfectly in character. Awesome job with this one, I can't wait to see what comes next!

Cool! I don't mind this pairing at all (because in comic lore they are supposed to get together!) but I do have a pretty big soft-spot for all of the Chlollie stuff out there. Anyway, I digress, this was totally cute and I look forward to reading the next 4 parts.

Massive kudos,
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I love when AC says "you make him crazy and he just returns the favor." It's so great! AC clearly gets the relationship better than Dinah does right now. The whole thing is awesome though. There's so much packed in here; I love it!