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Reviews For: Shin Slurpee Evangelion - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Krimzonrayne
2008-03-26
ch 4,
abuseAh,... look how toast-like they are... pause... wonderful!

That, my friend, is sheer brilliance.
Forever Rahhel
2006-04-25
ch 13,
abuseThat was a magnificent story.
I hoped for an epilouge.
Still it was funny and romantic.
OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOI...
2006-01-24
ch 13,
abuseI've read it all. And I've loved it all. A masterpiece. To be honoured. To be- (*bows*) -respected. I'd like to thank you for making me see the light. The light of funny.

Cast:

Naon Tiotami...Matthew Reilly
Jackson Ferrell...Dan Brown
Moose...Shinji Ikari
Yui...Spike Spencer
Unit 09...Tripod

Special thanks to me. And my mom. Love ya.

Cheerio,
Naon
Eva Unit-U
2004-02-19
ch 13,
abuseVery good, hilariously funny, plenty of romance, and ingenious Author created character designs. I had fun with this, good job.
Moosey Goodness
2003-10-25
ch 1,
abuseyan can cook!
Exonerate
2003-09-03
ch 13,
abusePure gold, the whole thing was hilarious. The Kaji-Gendo exchange was great too.
Scintilla
2003-09-03
ch 13, anon.
abuseI remember in one of the chapters you said about how the kids were finally getting to have a P.E. class outside 'cause it was getting warmer? Well, remember that Second Impact kinda screwed up the Earth's axial tilt, so they don't have seasons anymore...

I also thought the last chapter was a tad anticlimactic, what with such a goofy and wimpy 17th Angel, and then SEELE suddenly taking over... seemed a little inconclusive (they wouldn't stop before carrying out their plan for mankind)... and Gendo seemed a tad OOC in the first half or so... and whatever happened to all the Rei clones after they got their little jobs? :)

But other than those little things, I liked it. David actually made a pretty believable character and worked well as a pilot. Can't remember what else I wanted to say...
Kenshiro Mitsui -san
2003-08-31
ch 13,
abuseWow, and I thought this fic would never see the e-light of day...

This was one of my favorite fics back in the heyday of Evafiction, and I'm glad to see it finished now. Great job... have an internet cookie!
Bassline
2003-08-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis fic single-handedly got me addicted to Five Iron Frenzy. Nice to see that you've finally finished it.
Raoh
2003-08-30
ch 13,
abuseVery entertaining and I'm glad you took the time to finish it. The part with the final angel was a work of art
Sakura-Angel
2003-05-01
ch 8, anon.
abuse^grr^ HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? how could you leave it hanging? ^sobs^ slurpe...
claritinaddict
2002-10-07
ch 8, anon.
abusegreat fic, i first discovered this through a evafic archive, and was left hanging when i reached ch 6... until i found this website. then i'm left hanging again! arrrrgh, need more claritin! but anyways, one of the best sillyfics, similar in style to evanjellydonut (not to put your story down, but evanjellydonut is the best sillyfic i've read), but, good fic... write more please
rEd_DeViL_iN_tHe_HoUsE
2002-05-22
ch 8, anon.
abuseIf you can do more chapters immediately...plz do so!!!That was fascinating.
Water elemental
2002-05-15
ch 8,
abuseNOoooooooo, the joy is not gone! Please right more! you can't just end it there! I don't care if it takes another couple of years to update just don't friggen end it on a cliffhanger!
Seif412
2002-05-14
ch 8,
abuseGreat fic so far. I just warn you that as of lately author notes have not been going over well. I enjoy them though. Wow...running out of things to write today. Keep writing.
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