 Shara Sherenia 2010-01-03 . chapter 2 Hey it's me again :p
Glad to hear you're going to create your own Hymn! :D Hymmnos are amazing and charming that you'll love it once you master it (especially Cult Ciel and Ancient Metafalls hehe)
Ahem BTT
Good thing you explained how they become Reyvateils. But...temporary, huh? I would love seeing them obtaining Costumes and transform XD
Also, are their Cosmosphere like the basic soulspace or like Infelsphere?
Will Ayatane appear? XD (do NOT make Lyner infatuated with him, PLEASE! D: )
Okay I'll stop my rant. Please update sooner ^^
PS: does Aquagon-sama the one who teach you? |
 LvNa-cHaN 2009-12-22 . chapter 2Aah, Lyner is a glutton as ever! xD xD
Nice chapter explaining their Cosmosphere and the current situation there, and, oh... a bud of yaoi is starting to bloom! xD *got stabbed by Lyner and Croix* Don't have any suggestion, though. Not expert at the series, just took a glance over the materials and then quit xD
Waiting for the next chapter :3 |
 shebajay 2009-12-18 . chapter 2I love how you have both Croix and Lyner in two differenet mind sets. I look forward to seeing what happens next. I'll be waiting for your next update. |
 shebajay 2009-12-16 . chapter 1This looks really good. I hope you continue with this story. I love the plot of Lyner and Croix being reyvateils. Not to mention how you have everyone paired up. I look forward to you updating. |
 Shara Sherenia 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Uhmm...there shouldn't be any male reyateils because...well, the chromosomes made it impossible.
But I love the plot, and if you learn about Hymnoss, I think you can make your own Hymn for this fanfic ^^ |
 LvNa-cHaN 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Pretty interesting plot so far :D
I'll be waiting for the next update |
 aquagon 2009-10-26 . chapter 1It's pretty interesting, but...
*sigh*
Ir's near impossible to say how many times this breaks everything in the established canon, chronology, and wave science concepts. It might sound harsh, but that's how I view things. |
 burakkichu 2009-10-19 . chapter 1I'm curious to see what you're going to do with the Croix/Lyner cosmosphere, heheheh... ^__^ And it's about time there were male Reyvateils. I always thought it was just a tad bit dorky that they could only be female. |
 Minako the Dragon Maiden of DW 2009-10-07 . chapter 1i love ur crossover story. keep update. |