O.O I don't know what to say in this except WOW! Please update soon.

Hm...I've got a nasty feeling that it's that seducer (if there is such word) from ze Paree...GRAH!! Get away from him!! Dr. Cockroach belongs to Susan!! Grah!! I'll bite you, woman!! What did you do to General Mongar?! You stay away from them, you hear?! Ack!! (someone grabs her by choke hold and drags her away) Ack!! I.ll find you!! Get your hands off me, bastard!! (voice fades away) ...(a child comes in) I'm sorry, miss, Annebella does get her emotional outburst moments. Please don't take any notice of her, she sends her admiration to your story and talent (bows and walks off)

Too lazy to log in. I DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER.
OR ELSE.
I'LL...DO SOMETHING DRASTIC. LIKE MAKE FANART OF...HELL. SOMETHING BAD. >:E!

Oh a nice long, interesting chapter. Just the way I like it. Plleasse write more son! I want to read more!

Nice first chapter, it is interesting and I want to read moe so update soon!

Good so far, but a couple grammatical errors. Keep going! :3