Really nice change, but it must surely happen so fast, in order for them to be back in America before Edward and Bella get back. It makes sense as to why Alice is such a small vampire!

It has been my pleasure to read such a wonderful series of combined stories. It kept me captivated the entire time wanting more. Loved your writing and imagination.

Ok... Pretty sure that was aid waking up, but damn, put in some x's or something . On first read through, I was afraid that Alice killed Bella while reliving her change.

Wow! Wondering if we'll find out who exactly killed Aod, and if he's dead or undead.

Aod is a great character! Loved his meditations in the last couple chapters.

Wonderful twists- handled well. I'm hooked!

Hey this story is great, I love the fact that it's from A/J POV, I just hope it stays consistent and charming.

Much Love, P

I'm so confused...

I'm pretty sure the new born was Aod. Only he would be looking for Alice. That was a great ending it leaves us open for another great story. I really enjoyed this story and I am now an Alice & Jasper fan! I may also be a little biased I loves the Immortal Highlander series and they had alot of Fae weaved in their stories. I really feel transported to the world you create when you write so Thank you for another fantastic story with wonderful magical characters in strange exotic settings.

Another great chapter, thanks for the fantastic journey and characters, it was a wild captivating ride!

Amazing! I loved Aod with Volturi, how brave and dignified he was, how stupid and weak all the Volturi seemed in the presence of a little fairie! I hope he lives and I hope Alice returns to normal. another great chapter!

WOW AGAIN! I didn't see the Aod-Sakhmet pairing although it makes sense that only a little bit of heaven could find any good left in her. I did like the Jasper-Sakhmet parallel, you are such a good story teller. I love the fact that you freed the Dong-Mae & Chun-Tao. I really hope you write thier story. Another great chapter.

WOW! WOW! WOW! The fight scene was awesome, I loved the dragon you really conjured up images of a really mythical, magical creature, just fantastic!

This is all new and exciting. I really like how you explained the vampires being drawn to the fae for a little piece of heaven that was ingenius. I like the fact that it looks like Sakhmet is in love with Jasper, and that love is actually having a major effect on her personality. The fae up to their usual tricks with the food, classic! But the twists and turn are really cool and I have no idea what going to happen next! I am enthralled!

Ok, I didn't see Jasper staying with Sakhmet, thats going to be interesting! I hated the way Alice & Jasper separated, I felt so bad for both of them but particularly Jasper, Alice was so mean. Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one and I loved seeing Sakhmet brought down some!