Sorry for that last review!I was thinking of Lopmon not Renamon at the moment! And thank you for doing Renamon instead! Once again, sorry!

I hope you know that Lopmon is a BOY not a GIRL! Are you tryng to make Terriermon gay, or did you just not know? Sicko!

i wish u would continue it... its a pretty nice fic

YAY! _ LEERUKI! LEERUKI! I wuv ya for making this a Leeruki ficcie! _ thankies much! rukimakino P.S.-I forgot the password to my email add. sweetgurr, so can you email me at my other address, ? Thankies much! _

whos pushing your to do something else? bad person.

wow...that was SO GOOD. please please write another fic. could u please check out mine? i'd like 2 kno ur comments. thanks so much! wonderful fic!

Overall I liked this story. Kinda fluffy ending, but it was still good.

It did seem a little rushed. And everyone saying "I love you" and kissing everyone else... a little too perfect. Never get pressured into things. What would have made it great would be more of the other characters. And, if the evil Henry had been more dangerous. The worst thing he could do was punch Rika. He should have been about to do something seriously heinous. Think of just about anything Myotismon might do. *That* kind of heinous.

Wasn't it weird that the US version of the show did the two things I thought there was no way in the Dark Area that they'd do: Despite all the deva names being based on the mythological characters, they went with Antylamon. And despite Anteira, the movie Antiramon, and Japanese Antiramon being male, they made him a "her?" I was practically in shock this morning. But I guess Saban had no way of knowing Antiramon was male, as the episode that proves it is *way* down the line, and probably hadn't aired at the time they were working on the dub of this ep. Anyway, it's strange how the series lined up to match your fic, despite all odds. Say, I don't suppose you can work Lillymon into your next Tamers fic, and maybe... just maybe...

Anyway, though I wasn't too wild about the ending, the story was a great one, and I'm sad to see it end. Please, do more in this universe. I'd like to see what comes after. The Sovereign will not like Lopmon's betrayal. In the show, I'm assuming it's him who knocked her back to Rookie.

Anyway, we've got to know what happens next. Does Lopmon keep the ability to go between Lopmon and Antiramon at will? Also, I'd like to see your take on the Sovereign himself. Due to spoilers, I already know who it is (and wish I didn't.) But your version would be untouched by the series version. And where are the other characters? Is Impmon himself or Beelzemon? And with all twelve Devas out there, things can get very hot for the tamers. You've got to do more.

As for BlackRapidmon, I don't know about the US cards, if they even exist yet, but I saw the Japanese ones at Megchan's site (which, sadly, is gone) and all the attacks for Terriermon's dark line are the same as the attacks of his normal line. They are also all vaccine, just like the normal evolutions. All dark evolutions of the 03s have the same type as their normal evolutions. They also have the names of their normal evolutions, only with the word ‘black’ stuck onto them. (No need to stick with that.) Except for Renamon’s. Kyuubimon’s got Youkomon, Taomon’s got Doumon, and Sakuyamon has Kuzuhamon. The rookies don’t have dark forms. No need to stick with that, either.

Anyway, I hope we see more. Great story. Congratulations if you read all this, and if you didn’t get really POed after the less-than-complimentary first paragraph.

liked your story. but wuts wit the suspence? u suck.

That cousin, that wouldn't happen to be Oliver would it? Hehehe...

hurry an' finish hurry an' finish hurry an' finish HURRY AN' FINISH!

I GOTTA KNO WHAT HAPPENS!

awesome ficcie :)

Did you make up those attack names? The Japanese cards for BlackRapidmon have the same attacks as Rapidmon, but the US cards may be different. And what are BlackGargomon's attacks?

Anyway, good to see them back to normal. And now they'll be on the run from the Sovereign and the other Devas. They won't have it easy.

WOW! _ Finally, a Leeki ficcie! I was wondering when Ruki would finally say "I have to tell you something..." If ya need any ideas, just IM me at , or email me at . Ja! rukimakino

This is great! The idea with Terriermon liking Renamon's great. I love it! Although Lopmon and Terriermon is sorta strange, it's new and I haven't seen anything like it, but still it's good! BTW, if you're gonna make it Leeki, are you going to change it back to Renamon and Terriermon again?

This is so sweet!