Okay, let me just get something straight. "Niknatu Sora", indeed. I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. Obviously you've changed around the actual history of the various Lantern Corps, as well as the rings themselves. I've never noticed the rings having an actual personality or sentience of any kind. I also know that at least in the modern-age comics, Green Lanterns from the Corps can't do that 'phasing through walls thing', its restricted to Alan Scott, I think. I'm also not sure how Cordelia embodies Will. Harry and Luna I can understand, but I'd think that Xander would be a better choice, given that he stuck with the Scoobies despite being a normal human with no exceptional abilities except his tenacity.

Overall, I'm liking this. But I'm wondering how you're going to balance the Wizarding world with the intergalactic duties of the Corps.

Hello, alienyouthct, this may be a bit odd, but I have something to say.

I haven't read this story, or any of your stories, but I noticed how, about nine months ago, you left a review for a really obvious Mary-Sue story, saying, "Two hundred and sixty-five thousand words worth of self-insert. That would be impressive if it wasn't so lame."

I just saw that recently, and it made me laugh out loud. So I just wanted to say thank you, for being honest when people use this site to act out their perverted wish fulfilment.

This story is interesting, but the notion of a different color support class lantern kind of threw me off. It is starting to sound like something that might include lanterns in the rainbow hues. For green, there is blue... so would there be black, red, yellow (oh yeah, that's Sinestro and his corps), white, etc? Gah, flashbacks to power rangers right there. What guidelines are you using for the basis as Green Lanterns? Silver Age? Golden Age? Modern Age? Retcon Modern Age? I know you're putting your own spin on it, it should still conform in some ways to make it slightly believable as a homage to the source material while still flying in the face of it.

As for the support class... it does make some sense that even space cops need partners... the different color "feels" strange inside the Green Lantern concept though. A Lantern by himself/herself/itself is already a force to be reckoned with, hence they are able to mostly solo-patrol an entire assigned sector. This is especially true now since the retcon completely disregarded the yellow weakness (Kyle Rayner's ability to blow up a yellow star proved that) and got rid of the standard 24 hour recharge requirements (which I agree is stupid since not all planets have 24-hour-a-day revolutions).

Since the story is fairly in its opening chapters, I'll reserve judgment on the whole thing until I get a better view of where you're going with this fic.

please update soon!

Is Luna the Blue Lantern? I hope so!

very nice

Good start to a new Story Where was the Justice League when the Green Lantern needing help?



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Harry Potter and the power of Oa »
AU Harry Potter/Justice League. Oa has departed the universe forever, but it has left its essence in a young boy on a cold December night.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Humor/Adventure -
Chapters: 28 -
Words: 237,971 -
Reviews: 949 -
Updated: 7-9-09 -
Published: 3-24-09

Still think H/hr it Better then H/L

Heh, can't wait to see the other person, and what all will happen with all three of them, does that mean one will have to leave, and the others stay, as I doubt the Guardians will want that much concentrated on one world, even though DC seems to have a penchant for doing just that.

HAL and Ringmione (I'm pretty sure that's a proper name [I *think* it is - it's an object, but it's intelligent] so I'm going to capitalize the first letter,) are already becoming my heros...

Delightful!! Let me guess, the Blue Lantern is Luna Lovegood and she's got a "eclectic" uniform, at best. I do like the recruitment and the tones of the different rings, 'twould appear that they do adapt to those wearing them.

I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this one.

That's a fun and different literary exposition. I can't wait for more.

Good start, and will be curious about the outcome, and what that might mean for the new Ring Bearer as they learn their new role on Earth and the Universe at large.

awesome

Nice start! looking forward to more!

-Larry

I grant you that from the set up Harry is the choice but I would love to see a Luna as Lantern.