This is a good story so far. When are you going to update? I want to see what happens between Roxas and Xion next. There aren't many stories about Roxas and Xion making love on this site and if there are any, they are not finished. Could you at least finish yours?

seems great so far so update

Update it soon please, it is really good

DUDE U F'N PWN MAN(OR WOMAN) U SHOULD MAKE MORE!

This is a very good story so far. Could you update real soon? I want to see what happens between Roxas and Xion next?

This is a very good story so far. I've been waiting to see at least one story that shows Roxas and Xion as a couple. Continue to update real soon. I want to see what Roxas does with Xion next.

aw! it's so cute:3! i made 1 too but wat ever, i loved the game and thought this was nice... but why is it m?

This story is really cute.

And same here, I played the game and I was inspired to write something as well.

I think that there should be at least another chapter. =3

looks like this could be a really good story and i hope you take this thing places