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BioHazard82
2010-01-05 . chapter 23
Another great chapter.
ranni
2010-01-02 . chapter 23
Great new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
Celestialuna
2010-01-01 . chapter 23
Good chapter!
Celestialuna
2010-01-01 . chapter 22
Good chapter and a Happy New Year!
Doodle
2009-12-31 . chapter 23
Can you make it so that he gets to go to Gringotts to withdraw everything he has/had inherited from the various families that are in his bloodline(like, Potter, and any others that he has in his blood) or maybe there can be a blood test that the goblins have that to see what ancestors he has, how many vaults he REALLY has, not just the one he had that he used for buying school supplies, like a Family Vault, like, a vault where there's everything that the family/families have collected throughout the centries, like a books(family libraries in the vaults') section of the vaults', weaponry section, trunks filled with various possesions of different ancestors and his birth parents and all the other stuff that's done in other stories type things...
Alice4Ever
2009-12-31 . chapter 23
i really liked it :D
when harry goes back though is he not going to be nine? i dont know to me it seems that he wont be able to do anthying since he is nine haha idk maybe that that is just me
but this is really good and i hope that u do a sequal cause its good :)
yamiyugi23
2009-12-30 . chapter 23
yayayay! great chapter! but no! can't you have a baby Harry forever?! Maybe the Weasley twins could meet the elf twins one day?
ShadowOkamiYokai
2009-12-30 . chapter 23
pretty cool. i hav to agree with gandalf, archir is archir but he's still slightly harry. anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, and HAPPY NEW YEAR! 2010 HERE WE COME!
Earthangel1414
2009-12-30 . chapter 23
This is a really awesome story. I just came across it and could not put it down. I look forward to the next update. Happy New Year
OlivineWK
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
Definitely did not expect that time jump, but it was a good choice, because it lets the story continue on. I like that you're drawing Archir's self conflict to a close by having him travel back to the wizarding world, though it would have a greater impact on me if his self conflict was focused on a bit more, to really show how it has been an obstacle to Archir/Harry. I do wonder how he'll be using those 24 hours.

+ Archir slept shorter than most kids - slept less than (shorter makes you think of height instead of time in this case)

+ 43 inches - it would make it easier for readers if you changed that to feet and inches instead of just inches

Olivine
WereCatsRule
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
Must I tell u again? UPDATE!
Yellowflash85
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
ah it is so adorable that Archir is getting to act like a kid. Something he was never allowed as Harry Potter. And I can't wait to read what happens when he meets his friends back on earth? What will they say to him?
foosel97
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one ^-^
Vanime18431
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
The ending to this chapter wasn't quite what I expected, though I am looking forward to the next one, as usual! I wonder how everything will be for Harry/Archir in the Wizarding World and what will Aragorn and the others say? Surely Gandalf told them everything that is needed for Archir to have completion?

Hugs,
Vanime
ThisIsMeAndOnlyMe
2009-12-29 . chapter 23
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens back on Earth. Please please please please PLEASE don't stop writing! *sniffle* I don't want it to end :(
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