wow that was... i can't find words... i'm speechless (and that's rare for me) yo have a serious talent for poetry! you should do some more!

It does not have the same 'voice of Sherlock' that most of your other writing does, but I love it all the same.
I think it is because it is rather bad omen-ish and irrational, and I don't think Holmes would really consider premonitions like that. It is also a bit sentimental which I think, from your previous pieces, he would be rather scathing about.

Having said that it is beautiful intense poetry:

"Oh loyal companion
Can you see my heart tremble
Can you see the trepidation with which I look
Down into the swirling waterfall’s chasm..."

"Friend, this death would be so much easier to bear
If I did not have to listen to your tear-laden voice
As you call my name."

Is this about the story where he fakes his own death? What is the name of that particular episode? I want to read it now!
EVA

WOW! I love it! This was well written! :):) There's no words to describe it!

Since school started, I haven't really had time to read every fic that looks promising, but I am so glad that I decided to read this. I loved it! It was quite vivid and the ending was particularly haunting.

Oh...*shiver* That was really great. Excellent imagery and perfectly chilling. Love it.