Holy Crap!

Remind me never to make you angry! lol

Very descriptive!

wow... they took your iPod! that's cruel, even worse than what BJ did to these guys! no wonder why you were so upset as to write this!

anyway, if it didn't make you feel better i should tell you i think it came out pretty well. I liked it a lot, especially the last part. Consider that i'm not a blood person and i was having breakfast.

Oh my god. That is so fuking gory it's insane! XD love it. I love the one's where people go insane in it. Brings life to teh story. Makes it better

Evil laughter mwahahahahahahahahahaha

Holy freaking cow. That was some serious crap. Extremely vivid writing and imagination. Remind me not to piss you off. What on earth got you into this mood?

Btw- I have to admit that these creeps really didn't deserve anything less than BJ's total attention. Don't mess with a poltergeist in love. Nice work