there is no way i could hate this story, it was soo awesome that i loved it, great job on writing it

Very very good !

*smile* thats a pretty end ;)
Yes its unclear who wins, but your story are absulutly great.
It wins my respect!
Cute, wonderful, and nothing to correct
Good Job!

greez choco

P.S. And sorry for my bad english (greez from Germany)

haha.. nice... loved the characterization. definitely one of my favourite light hearted jalex stories

that was awsome! i LOVE IT!

That was awesome! I personally don't like the incest issue but it's not our faults that they made Alex & Justin have great chemistry together...they should not be siblings.

Great writing and the fights were definitely typical Justin & Alex and Alex's behavior in the end was WOW (LOL)!

This is truely great cause it's so them and the UST in the show is as clear as crystal -giggle- a really good (and EXTREMELY hot) fanfic, wanna make a sequel on what they did next? -smirk-

...I've gotten to like this couple. -.- Something's wrong with me, 'cause they're brother and sister. LMAO

omg that end was hot! like really hot i loved it so much! you need to write way more jalex this was great!

I really liked it, the characters were so spot on and the culmination was lovely, lol. That word seems so dirty after reading this. Awesome.

Ciao

This is brilliant. Really. Like really really brilliant.

The whole transition of their relationship was perfect & totally believable.

It was just such a fun read.

I'm kind of speechless.

this was good. u did a good job!

This was nicely done. I hope you do more Jalex soon!

I would say poor Justin, but... :)

I loved it! Very good story!