Once again, you kill me.
I don't know how you do it..
You give us just fragments of a whole story, yet I understand the entire thing in depth..it's amazing, I don't know how you do it.
And, Roxas's morning-nest hair it the best description ever.
Lovely story, as always.

You're probably my favorite writer in this fandom and this doesn't change a thing. I don't know how you manage to twist and pull me in, but you make me want to be a better writer. Truthfully. Thanks for this little gem.

Oh my God... what. o_o

This was amazing. Your writing is exquisite. Where have you been hiding all my life?

What was better, I think, is that you included the old west into your story -- and gunslingers. I've been infatuated with gunslingers ever since I read The Dark Tower series -- which was a long time ago, but still.

The only thing I would say negatively about it would be that their personalities don't fit the characters, but I'm guilty of that as well when it comes to AU's like these. You really want to write a story, but you also want to write fanfic... and it just kind of ends up like that.

Thank you for writing a fanfic that was worthwhile to read.

Oh my god.

Do you ever stop being amazing? I MEAN, REALLY. To inject such critical life in such a small amount of words. It's like poetry. Remarkable.

Jay-sus, you've done it again! Cowboy stories and Kingdom Hearts, I'm not sure there's much I love more, especially when it's written in your beautiful style. This is brilliant.

I've been a horribly bad reviewer since I've read almost all of your stories but never once left a review, especially since you are one of my favorite writers both in the fanfiction world and the real world. I was so happy when I checked your page and found a new story.

Anyways, this story is fractured in the best way possible, linked only by the minutest of threads. Each section seems like a little snapshot of the characters, almost as if the readers are looking at one of those really old photo albums. The fact that none of the dialogue is enclosed by quotation marks make the whole story seem just at the edge between past and present, something that the reader can both grasp but not (if that makes any sense to you).

The atmosphere created by your choice of words really just screams “The Old West”, and there are just so many lines that flow wonderfully.

The only complaint is that it might be too fractured. Many times while reading, I was at a complete loss as to what was happening, but since the general idea is conveyed it really isn’t much of a flaw.

Thanks so much for posting such a gorgeous piece of work.

Thank you for giving me something to favorite on ffnet again :)

I got so excited when I saw this in my inbox, and was thinking 'wow... I can't believen I just got this excited over a fanfiction I haven't even read yet'.


But then I read it and was thinking 'I should've been /way/ more excited when I saw this in my inbox.




You astound me, honestly, you do.

I am thoroughly confused in the best of possible ways. Interesting plot line, and nice to see Roxas all... bad ass like that. You always make up the best fics.