That was beautiful.
Thank you so much!

I just started reading your stories, and you capture these characters' voices so incredibly well. You're a very gifted writer.

I really really like this story but I really have to speak up here.

Nemesis first aired in early 2000

First Gen iPod was released late 2001

'Follow You Home' was released in 2005

It would not have been possible for Sam to listen to that song, on that device during that episode.

Although it probably left me more frustrated than it left Jack and Sam, I really enjoyed this brief interlude a lot. :)

Thank you for maintaining character integrity. So many people screw that up. And this whole plot is a fair point.

Such a sweet, tender story explaining oh so well the reasons for their continued distance.

Jack confused is so adorable. Teal'c is just wonderful.

Lots of emotional depth to this chapter - loved it to bits!

What a scream - Sam enjoying the relaxed familiarity and Jack just about ready to explode. Wonderful!

My dear friend, Nell, has just recommended you as a great read so here I am and thoroughly enjoying this very first chapter. I do so love UST more than established relationships, so this is such a treat. Thoroughly enjoying your characters - I can picture them as if watching it on the screen. Fabulous job!

Hey, I remember now! I've read this story of yours already in one of the archives. I liked it a lot, thanks for sharing! :D

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Aw.. that was sweet. Great job. Thanks for sharing! - Jenn

But... my husband is from Sheboygan... :P Excellent start.

Very good story.

I loved the line: "she knew that she'd found her future and he knew that he'd found his salvation." Such a beautiful statement and beautiful story.