OMG! This story is amazing! One of the best i ever read! please write a sequel!

you should make a sequel. it was great! Keep it up!

you should make a sequel. it was great! Keep it up!

Please do a sequel...its not finished yet!

Hi! I really enjoyed this story, it was great! To me you did such a great job, that the story stands on it's own. You don't need a sequel. You did a great job with characterization. I agree with the reactions on both Sydney's and Michael's part. I especially loved that you finally brought out the 'father' in Jack. I hope they do that in the series soon. Overall, I couldn't have thought that up better myself. The only other thing that I may have added was Sydney being 'comforted' by Michael at her place, and a little kiss(but you might be to young for that:)). Again, I loved it and you don't need a sequel. You did very well. But, if you want to try, go for it! I'm sure it will be great also.

DEFINETLY WRITE A SEQUAL! THAT WAS GREAT! PLEASE POST THE NEXT PART SOON! THANX! TATA

That was great ! And yes, you should a sequel:)

Great story! Incredibly well written, and yes, plese do a sequel!

do you even have to ask! more more more!

Lulu

Liked it! Personally, I think it stands well on its own without a sequel. This way, it's like a glimpse into a moment of Sydney's life. If you do write a sequel, however, I will definitely read it!