the sweet thing about this story...I CAN ACTUALLY SEE IT HAPPENING! This is so ironic that I'd find this. I'd just been contemplating the epilogue yesterday and thinking that CLAMP should come out with a second series of Tsubasa with a whole bunch of stuff like this happening!! Admittedly I know that's not going to happen. There's only so much those four Japanese mangaka can do right? But seriously 10/10 really. this is amazing.
I especially loved the Harry Potter arc and the ah...ahem...way that Kurogane and Fai spent their evening in the castle XDXDXDXDXD True, THAT might not be something that CLAMP would do (cause you know, all their canon couples, by the end will still not have kissed...even in other series.) But still This fic is amazing as is XD

Amazing. An excellent one shot.

It's Mik signed on. Again, loved the story :D

UWAH! 100/100. Without a doubt. You had everyone in character and you had almost no grammatical errors at all. And obviously, the story was fantastic. I loved how they ended up in Harry Potter world. I actually would have liked to see a little more Sakura/Syaoran, but I loved how shy Syaoran was about her being in a night dress. It's so true, too.
I wonder why Fai always loves to be such an idiot around Kurogane? lol
Great style, great writing and completely true to CLAMP, aside from the pairing actually getting somewhere in their relationship. lol

Thanks for the great read

nice fic
liked it

i loved your story. it's simple, it's everyday journey and the idea of family... they seems all grown, the characters that we left in the epilogue and yet different. i loved the way fay let shaoran and sakura speach... the only thing that maybe miss in the story was a visit to Tomoyo in Nihon and Watanuki, with the two mokona^^
the remain of the story had left me a sweet taste. i love it

I adored this when I read it on LJ and I loved it just as much re-reading it again. A beautifully written fic.

hahaha
it was cute and llovely
*hoping this really happen*
*sad that Tsubasa is done*
*sob* *sob*

Wow! This was beautifully written. Every word was a delightful read in my opinion. This is definitely something that would happen after the epilogue. I can picture it when reading. The moments were sweet and humorous (reminded me of the parts before Acid Tokyo), and everyone was in character. Also, I like the addition of Koko. I wish I could say more, but this is just awesome. Great job! :D

I figured that the minor crossover is actually Harry Potter?

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Corrections/Feedback:

{and a very good start for Fai to find whoever it was Kurogane had carried about so and make sure they implicitly understoodIt Would Not Be Happening Again, right?} understood It.

{-, but then he went off into the complicated realms of spells and writings and Sakura’s feathers,} I don't think there should be a comma after the dash. I also found that a few of your other sentences have a comma after it. Is that intentional?

{immediately querying whether Fai was alright.} "alright" should be "all right."

{Kurogane, he announced, made Fai hot just be sitting there, brooding away in his big black cloak.} by sitting there.

well, i just finished tsubasa tonight and this fic has officially become my 'what happens after' canon - i was a little disappointed when clamp left kuro/fai ambiguous and totally suprised when they separated syaoran and sakura but thats why awesome fanfiction like this exists, right?
:)

WOW~ I just finished readin the finale of Tsubasa and your story was completely what I would think they would do as they all traveled across the worlds. The contacts with Sakura was cute and Syaoran is just so adorable! This is defintely a favorite! AND YOU CROSSOVER WITH HARRY POTTER! *Squeals with utter delight*

I love this!

This is so good!*_*
I was really sad for the ending of Tsubasa, and in particulary because there wasn't a decent KuroFai ending (in a romantic way, of course) in the epilogue. It was enough an hint, or a word... A kiss would be too much ne?
But this story give a proper "end", even if it's not an end, to the two of them. Now I'm satisfied!^^

The charatcters are absolutely IC and the situations are realistic, in the CLAMP way.
So thank you so much for writing this ff!
Kiss
Valentina

I really enjoyed reading this.


and yeah, it's SO sad it's over, but I feel the ending left it open for a continuation, or even another Xover thing who knows =P


but excellent story <3

...Is it awful that I totally recognized the song? I feel like such a nerd. But I love it too; I wanna learn to play piano just so I can play that song, lol.

Anyway, I really liked this story. It was cute and sweet and captured a sense of /peacefullness/ that was just the perfect epilogue to the epilogue of a series that started lighthearted and then turned into a giant bucket of ANGST and PAIN and no small amount of CONFUSING. Also, the Fai being jealous of himself made me smile like /nothing/ else.

Excellent story, I really loved it. Kuro & Fay's interaction and relationship was very well written, and they weren't OOC either. I applaud you for the wonderful job. Thanks for writing this. Keep up the good work.