|Reviews for Eldan's Mage|
| erica.phoenix16 3/11/13 . chapter 25
Please oh please continue! Your version of the wizard of Oz is amazing!
The Black Norn is much meaning, then the wicked witch and that's saying something!
She's like a cross between a wicked witch and an evil overlord!
| Dude1991 11/15/12 . chapter 25
OMG OMG OMG
Soooooo good. i love it.
Dena is so strong, i love how you've gave her so many likeable features. and bless the boys you gotta love them.
that witch is smart, but that ain't always good :-P
its been so long, but sooo worth the wait... i'm glad your back and kinda gutted that the story is almost finished...
its a great chapter and i really can't wait for the next one
| angelofroses94 11/14/12 . chapter 25
Thank for finally coming back from the dead!XD pleas continue man I have to know how it ends!3
| SideshowJazz1 11/14/12 . chapter 25
Love it! Actually, The Simpsons did a parody of those guards, except they were singing "All we own, we owe". Also, I've seen the musical of "TWoO", a student who used to be at my school played the head guard.
Enough of my rambling, update soon!
| Katie Williams 10/18/12 . chapter 1
Awesome beginning. You introduced all the characters well while still avoiding the info-dump a lot of authors get trapped into. I like the modern twist on the story, with the girls roller skating and working at a diner, and the neighbor threatening to call Animal Control. It's a refreshing take on the classic movie.
Also, I noticed this fanfiction is 86K words long and 24 chapters. Short romance novels at about 50K, so it looks like you have the patience and dedication to write a full length novel, if you wanted to. It takes a lot of work on almost a daily basis and a lot of authors lose passion halfway through, but you've got what it takes.
Also, it helps that you read a lot and watch a lot of movies, so you understand how plots unravel.
Great start to a fun story. Looking forward to keep reading.
-Your cousin Katie
| SuperDarkRose 3/31/12 . chapter 24
I just loved this story! I wish and urge you to continue because this is the first oz story that I've really liked. I encourage you to update soon please! Much love!
| classicmovielover 3/20/12 . chapter 24
I wish you would update this. I really was enjoying it. Please update again!
| ThePenWieldingRose 10/11/11 . chapter 24
I absolutely LOVE your story! I can't wait for the rest! I think the way you've made Tin Man sarcastic, Lion lovable, and Scarecrow and Dorothy a couple just fantastic! A fresh and new way to look at the beloved story! (Not to mention the Black Norn's extremely on edge) Keep up the beautiful work!
| harvey 7/15/11 . chapter 1
this is brilliant! 3 loved every second
| Dude1991 6/11/11 . chapter 24
LOOOOOOOL I'm loving it...
first bit was brill, can't believe how much I was cheering lol... no seriously ma bf thought I watching football hahaha. I got to admit if I were in Dena shoes I'd be so scared, i like that u've kept her brave throughout this... and the second bit well I love Themen anyways but I think I fell for him more, he's just so cute lol... and the bees were a nice little bit drama (before the bigger drama) lol... it kinda funny that even tho I know this modern I still thinks its awesome that u've got rader lol I know dumb hehe
anyways I really can't wait for the next update... I promise I won't moan about how long it takes... scout honour :-)
keep up the good work hun
| SideshowJazz1 6/10/11 . chapter 24
Good for the group! I knew about the Jitterbug, but apple juice? Are you serious? Wow!
Anyway, loved the chapter, love the story, looking forward to the next bit. I can't wait to find out how they defeat the Black Norn-if they do at all.
| Dude1991 6/3/11 . chapter 23
OMG OMG OMG OMG
Sooooooooooo good, seriously I screamed when I saw the update hahahaha... You are brill, making Dena so strong; the fact that she never backed down even towards the end, I've never felt such emotion for a character before, I swear I was practally crying with her near the end lol.
I liked the fact u didn't hold back on the phyical violence either, I felt the slaps lol... I really felt that the original missed this somwhat...
I really cant wait for the next update so now I'll stop moaning lol I promise :-)
P.S. Why do I think there is sumthing going on wif the mage? Seriously me thinks he is up to sumthing lol... Oh and the boys, Yh they're looking good hahha.
| SideshowJazz1 6/3/11 . chapter 23
Oh no, poor Dena! Still, love how much she's fighting back and a resent for those cliffhangers! Well, they keep me reading, at least! UPDATE!
| Lotus201877 5/5/11 . chapter 7
yeah ive heard about the actor tin man becoming scarecrow.
Have you heard of the 'jitterbug'?
| SideshowJazz1 3/30/11 . chapter 22
This is really interesting! Please update soon! I love the relationship developing between Dena and Quen especially.