Great story. Very funny and very much in the tone of the show and the characters involved. Made me miss the show.

Perfect.

Everyone was so in character and the last paragraph made my night!

Thanks.

Nik - his wife, not the Armadillo.

I need more Ted/veronica stories that are like yours! :D I could hear Veronica say that to Ted and Ted acting like that! haha

Great characterization even without so much description.

Great!

That made me really laugh out loud. That last line was great! YOure great at writing Veronica. I could just hear her voice in my head saying the words! Amazing story.

Hahah, loved it!

Absolutely hilarious. I am ROTFLMAO! I can only imagine Veronica's lingerie. More, please.

Haha! That was fantastic. The last line was especially perfect. :D Excellent job!

Red

Omy! You did a amazing job with them! I could picture the whole scene in my head! Very good :d I hope you will write more v\t fics!

xo

"I won't be a part of this."

"You are a part of this, Ted."

hahaha...veronica's dialogue was spot on, and she would so do something like this! loved it!

i love how you've captured their character and dialogue so well! i can just hear and imagine them saying these things with all the facial expressions, etc. and yes, that's so veronica to try to do something like that and still keep things professional.

hope you write more better off ted fics (ted/veronica ship please!).