I love this story! You really did an amazing job! I love the storyline, characters, and how much u made Milo and Kida devoted to each other! The Epilogue is my favorite part!

NICE!

P.S. I love your Atlantis site! I go on it all the time!

Wow! This story was awesome! It should be Atlantis 3 or replace Atlantis 2 (and they could convince the old actors like Michael J. Fox to come back and do it! Ok... wishful thinking...). Probably my favourite thing about it was Throck. This villain actually seems to pose a problem, unlike other villains. *gasp* Trokia (sp?) was so realistic. It seemed like an actual aspect of the story. A real page-clicker! I aspire to write like this! Thanks for writing it!

Lisa, is it? Your name, I mean to address.

About the story, I have not read more than half a dozen Atlantis fanfics to date, and I must say where I deemed some others as below the movie's expectations, I preferred this one as worth archiving.

However, I have some misgivings... about the way you wrote it, and particularly concerning how you endorsed some of those aforesaid fanfics I mentioned I deemed as... y'know. That needn't matter. Even so, should you by the act of "swallowing of pride hurt" wish to be curious about it, I myself weel do the likewise swallowing n humblee oblige thee.

Paarley vou fraancey?

(reply to your pm. sorry. i hit the limit for pms today, letting others know :) ) you're welcome! just trying to help :)

What a coincidence to run into this story.

I came across this four years ago on a site that's closed down now-I loved it, it was the first Atlantis fanfic I'd read.

I was thrilled to find it again and re-read it and it remains my favorite Atlantis fic.

Great job is all I can say.

I've read this story through several times and each time I've really enjoyed it. Especially this chapter with the Orion/Meera subplot. They're great characters that should always be together.

Please write some more stories.

I have read this story a million times, and I still love it! It was wonderful, and beautifully written! Keep it up!

I have read this story so many times and I could have sworn I posted a review up before and I realized I havent! But I thought this story was absolutely great! I wish Disney could have bought this from you to make a good sequel instead of the lame one they did instead! But I thought the character portrayals were great, esp Milo's. And I love Orion, he's such a great, strong character that I grew to love! Agai, great story and please write more!

Cool story! At first I thought that you killed Milo, but you didnt. This story is awesome!

Wow! Thats really good!

THIS STORY WAS SOOOOOO GREAT! I read the whole story straight through! I loved all the romance and I loved the plot! It was a great idea to make Rourke the essence of the Dark Crystal! And now Milo and Kida are gonna have a baby (squeals)v This story was wonderful and is going to be one of my favorites!

WOW! I've already read this story before and loved it so much, actually it was the first fan fic I ever is so have wonderful writng talent and really should think about writing a get 10 out of 10 ,Wonderful story with with a capital W!

Very nice _ the whole idea and writing of the story is very nice. but personaly i think that milo and kida should NOT i repeat NOT be married. ofcoarse this is just my personal opinion. the thought of both of them married and saying "sweetie" "honey" "darling" well, to me it seems lame. i think it would be better if they were just friends. plus i dont think that kida would say honey or sweetie to milo anyway. because that behavior is from the surface world. and since atlanis was been cut off from the surface for 8800 or so years. kida wont know about the "honey" "sweetie" thing! ti me it seems more "Kida like" if she just calls milo "milo" plain and simple.

That was wonderful :) Sorry I took so long to make my way through it :) It was so well reasoned out and the characterizations were great. I am assuming there may be more to come in the line of sequals?

A wonderful ending to a truly amazing Atlantis story. Your writing talent is so awesome, Lisa! You keep the spirit of the movie right in line within the story! Milo and Kida's emotions, strengths, and weaknesses are very well described here as well! You peek into their minds and develop their character beings so well. There is no doubt that The Dark Ones is among the best in the Atlantis fandom. Write a sequel to the story, Lisa! I want to see more of your writing talent.

The Dark Ones is in my Favorite Stories List where it deserves to be. Your name has earned a place in my Favorite Authors List too! Go where the dream takes you!