 silver-eyed 2009-12-04 . chapter 2sorry took so long to review, but i must say, this just intrigues me more and more. glad that you updated, i love all this spy and secret stuff with hackers and security risks and all that, never got into hacking myself but i like the idea of it sometimes. so this story is totally awesome! and i can't wait for more! XD |
 Brown Eggs and Green Ham 2009-12-01 . chapter 2great chapter, the LEAF is a really good idea. what does DISE stand for? |
 Moiya Hatake 2009-11-24 . chapter 2I love where this is going! PLOT IS WONDERFUL! I especially love the interactions between Minato and Kakashi. The insults are priceless. So looking forward to another chapter and this one makes me excited to try again on the fics I have to update an complete. Thanks for the inspiration to write! *glomps hugs* |
 jolteonforever 2009-11-24 . chapter 2Woah this is a fast moving, really interesting story :)
I can't wait to read more, the Dicey division, haa :D
But wow, slowly failing? :|
foreshadowing for something truly horrendous? like in chapter 1, how minato will eventually break his heart?
:| |
 Kuyugen 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Waitwait. Are you referring to the Jiraiya-Naruto piece? (Swallowed a Fly)
If it isn't, never mind. |
 Kuyugen 2009-11-24 . chapter 2A yellow-headed dumbass with blue ink on his chin whistling behind towers of paperwork while folding paper airplanes.
Oh, I could just picture that wonderfully.
I love this story- (eyeroll; duh, I love all of your stories- you could make peanuts sound funny and interesting) and... yeah. That's it. |
 Katseng 2009-11-24 . chapter 2 Goshdarn, I can't log in to ffn. Eh. You know where to find me.
AH. I AM SO EXCITED.
Uhm. You have the BEST. FREAKING. QUOTES. EVER.
Where the heck did you get "saucy little sarcasm sandwich"? AHAHA. I GIGGLESNORTED.
"And he keeps having to remind himself that the man isn't in fact an idiot but the head of LEAF. Namikaze Minato has a thousand levels of danger in the layers of his pinkie nail. Fucking Yondaime."
OHEMMGEE. Love. Okay. That was not even remotely coherent.
Uhhm, I really liked this chapter?
X 3
~Kat |
 Crisstaei 2009-11-06 . chapter 1I love love LOVE this storyline! I have always wanted to see an older Kakashi and Minato interaction, and this fic just made me ridiculously happy. Nothing would bring me greater pleasure than reading more of this, so please update soon! |
 Jumpingbeans480 2009-11-03 . chapter 1This is really interesting, although sometimes I got a little confused when trying to understand the AU. Maybe it was too 'adult' for my teenage brain to comprehend?
Please update soon! |
 bladesofTime 2009-10-17 . chapter 1Beautifully written! I love your writing style and the way you portray your characters. Having read several of your other stories (and loving them just as much), I know that this one will be great. I look forward to reading more.
~bladesofTime <3 |
 Airia 2009-10-14 . chapter 1 Hmm, I really like it. It's alot different from your other stories, yes, but it's rather enjoyable. I enjoy the scant simularities between the Naruto universe and this one. It gives some sort of semblence to the characters and their original backstories, but at the same time, carves out new identities for them, which you have molded masterfully. Anyways, I'm intrigued to see where this goes and where the plot takes the unanswered questions presented in this first chapter. Update soon,
Regards,
Airia |
 silver-eyed 2009-10-12 . chapter 1wow...i L O V E this! it has such a great start! i mean granted minato's the big shit but there's just enough hint of mystery to him that still makes it so exciting and the same goes for kakashi. they both have that edge that i'm just fascinated by, you write them so well! but anyway, can't wait for more of this! XD |
 Miridis 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Love it! |
 VescaWithoutWings 2009-10-10 . chapter 1I really liked this XD |
 Tee Fannie 2009-10-08 . chapter 1wow
intense AU
it's so interesting :)
a little bit confusing but it's cool. :)
update soon~ ;) |