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silver-eyed
2009-12-04 . chapter 2
sorry took so long to review, but i must say, this just intrigues me more and more. glad that you updated, i love all this spy and secret stuff with hackers and security risks and all that, never got into hacking myself but i like the idea of it sometimes. so this story is totally awesome! and i can't wait for more! XD
Brown Eggs and Green Ham
2009-12-01 . chapter 2
great chapter, the LEAF is a really good idea. what does DISE stand for?
Moiya Hatake
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
I love where this is going! PLOT IS WONDERFUL! I especially love the interactions between Minato and Kakashi. The insults are priceless. So looking forward to another chapter and this one makes me excited to try again on the fics I have to update an complete. Thanks for the inspiration to write! *glomps hugs*
jolteonforever
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
Woah this is a fast moving, really interesting story :)

I can't wait to read more, the Dicey division, haa :D

But wow, slowly failing? :|
foreshadowing for something truly horrendous? like in chapter 1, how minato will eventually break his heart?

:|
Kuyugen
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
Waitwait. Are you referring to the Jiraiya-Naruto piece? (Swallowed a Fly)

If it isn't, never mind.
Kuyugen
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
A yellow-headed dumbass with blue ink on his chin whistling behind towers of paperwork while folding paper airplanes.

Oh, I could just picture that wonderfully.

I love this story- (eyeroll; duh, I love all of your stories- you could make peanuts sound funny and interesting) and... yeah. That's it.
Katseng
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
Goshdarn, I can't log in to ffn. Eh. You know where to find me.

AH. I AM SO EXCITED.

Uhm. You have the BEST. FREAKING. QUOTES. EVER.

Where the heck did you get "saucy little sarcasm sandwich"? AHAHA. I GIGGLESNORTED.

"And he keeps having to remind himself that the man isn't in fact an idiot but the head of LEAF. Namikaze Minato has a thousand levels of danger in the layers of his pinkie nail. Fucking Yondaime."

OHEMMGEE. Love. Okay. That was not even remotely coherent.

Uhhm, I really liked this chapter?

X 3

~Kat
Crisstaei
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
I love love LOVE this storyline! I have always wanted to see an older Kakashi and Minato interaction, and this fic just made me ridiculously happy. Nothing would bring me greater pleasure than reading more of this, so please update soon!
Jumpingbeans480
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
This is really interesting, although sometimes I got a little confused when trying to understand the AU. Maybe it was too 'adult' for my teenage brain to comprehend?

Please update soon!
bladesofTime
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
Beautifully written! I love your writing style and the way you portray your characters. Having read several of your other stories (and loving them just as much), I know that this one will be great. I look forward to reading more.

~bladesofTime <3
Airia
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
Hmm, I really like it. It's alot different from your other stories, yes, but it's rather enjoyable. I enjoy the scant simularities between the Naruto universe and this one. It gives some sort of semblence to the characters and their original backstories, but at the same time, carves out new identities for them, which you have molded masterfully. Anyways, I'm intrigued to see where this goes and where the plot takes the unanswered questions presented in this first chapter. Update soon,
Regards,
Airia
silver-eyed
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
wow...i L O V E this! it has such a great start! i mean granted minato's the big shit but there's just enough hint of mystery to him that still makes it so exciting and the same goes for kakashi. they both have that edge that i'm just fascinated by, you write them so well! but anyway, can't wait for more of this! XD
Miridis
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Love it!
VescaWithoutWings
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
I really liked this XD
Tee Fannie
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
wow
intense AU
it's so interesting :)
a little bit confusing but it's cool. :)
update soon~ ;)
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