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AshK
2009-11-13 . chapter 5
Nice work.
Wonderbee31
2009-11-12 . chapter 5
Usagi in a cicus, can well imagine that scene in my head, but have to say that Naruto is looking for a spanking more and more.
KaiserPhoenix
2009-11-11 . chapter 5
It's amazing really Usagi always get on stage for some reason. Did sh ebecome an exhibitionist while I wasn't looking? Though she wasn't naked, she sure like getting on stage a heck of a lot.

Renata, NAruto, and Sakura can access lunar energy now. Reminds me of a DC villain whose strength varies with the moon phases but got owned by Ragman who use her own momentum against her.

This continues to be interesting. So far, this makes what? The third time someone wants Usagi's body for themselves? I dfon't know if she's irritated or flattered. I'd say both.

Another personality to add to that psyche of hers.
cabrera1234
2009-11-11 . chapter 5
somebody should make a picture of usaqi dress as a sex cowgirl
AshK
2009-11-08 . chapter 4
Good work! Keep up the great work! Excellent update!
AshK
2009-11-08 . chapter 3
Nice update as always! Keep up the great work!
cabrera1234
2009-11-06 . chapter 4
i saw that movie it really good
Wonderbee31
2009-11-05 . chapter 4
Fun sections here, though have to wonder if Naruto's a little more than a bit touched in the head at times, especially with Usagi and her own MPD problems. Neat to see her tease Tsunade earlier, and wonder how the mission will play with Blaze on the way to create havoc?
KaiserPhoenix
2009-11-05 . chapter 3
Hmm, interesting development on the part of Oorchimaruko. It's a good thing that you explained her personality and Ranma keeping her in check.

Ace of Hearts was hilarious in how he dealt with her. Well, she WAS crying by the end of it, but hey Usagi is Usagi.

Man, Usagi keeps losing her powers and has to go through some tough trials. Not like Ranma doesn't either, considering he's been sent to another dimension and willfully allowed Kirin to gran him.

It'll be interesting to see how they both deal with it.
cabrera1234
2009-11-05 . chapter 3
i was shock to find out Disney Corporation have naruto now. right now they are not doing any new episdoe of the power rangers there just showing the old episode from the past like the first power rangers team.
AshK
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Good work! Keep on keepin on!
Wonderbee31
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Nice section there, and agreed, ads I went to the movies to see Labyrith, and thought it was a fun fic, with Henson at full power.
Tristar
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
I thought I reconized the layout! I've watched that movie twice in my life let me see if I can remember the plot...hm...Girl looses little sibling(brother I think...) Follows this whited haired guy into the Labrynth goes through several trials makes friends and allies and in the end has to make a choice.

I good chapter and excellent test of wisdom!
cabrera1234
2009-10-23 . chapter 2
i saw the Labyrinth too when i was a kid i think the puppets were done by the jim hensen people the ones who created kermit the frog.
doyle300
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
is there anyway you can just stop writing? you have way too many crack stories that just take up space. no one reads them.
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