Another imaginative story. I liked the interaction between all of the different characters, especially when Naga popped in. Naga, Urd, and Ryoko having a night out sounds more and more promising all the time. Thanks for the fun story.

i don't think ye took enough time on this fic,as there were a few to many gaps, but at least it was an easy read. 7.7/10

not bad, not bad at all. I decided to review this instead of lurking for once. _ Well, on to the next chapter

This was a cool story Bob, and now you got me thinking very hard on getting that Slayers and 'AMG' that you also cleared up parts of the fic.

Thanks for the explanations.

I had always figured that the power sealing was more like what the OMG dieties do when they enter the Earth Realm. Sealing powers to prevent accidents, not to prevent their mere presence from destroying a world.

Hope to see the next chapter of your new story soon.

Yes that was a very big ending, so what is next? i look forward to the next series in this universe that you have created. Ja-ne (_)

Ah man, and I wanted to see if Trunks or Goten would end up with Sasami! Well it's your story so i guess I'll continue reading...

Ok I am definitely going to continue rading. I can always expand the DBZ crossover with updating one of my stories, so I anticipate your story.

And by the way, your welcome again!

dennisud

Well, that was interesting, but confusing.

There is a canon problem I see with this; L-sama is so powerful that to have more than a fraction of her power within a single world risks that worlds destruction. How does the Slayers universe survive having three beings of comprable power within it?

Another problem is that, all of the ones Lina had fought were Mazuoka, like Xellos. So, why isn't Xellos, or some of the other Mazuoka part of the monster?

And here's a question; what is the difference between an Old One, and Kami-sama?

Well, not counting those little points, another great chapter.

Hope to see more soon.

A nice ending well thought out and you had the rare instance where a villan was fought, everybody knew it, but it had no name. Neat!

Well I am anticipating the nexy story as Ayeka and hopefully soon,Ryoko will enjoy or bare with pregnancy. You know that Ryoko couldn't stand to be left out even though pregnancy can be hell.

Well see ya with the next chapter of "A day of Revelations"!

dennisud

nice fic so far!

You convinced me, I've decided that my next anime purchasing spree will include the Slayers 1st season set and the 1st AMG DVD.

I'm sorry to see that the next chapter is the last you'll be doing in this series of stories. There were a lot of Ayeka/Ryoko moments that I've enjoyed. As Nobuyuki noted once, "A friendship between two women is a beautiful thing". Of course he probably had more than just friendship in mind when he said that.

looks like somthing big is in the works. I realy linke what you are doing with this one.

Very interesting. The plot has been very original so far, to my knowledge, and the characterizations are pretty good. I really enjoyed reading this last chapter. The magical girl transformations and Mara and Urd's reactions were amusing. Good job. Thank you very much for writing and posting this story on the internet.

Hey don't stop now. I wanna know who draws the royal flush!

First I hope you continue this saga, even if you have to go to other stories to think out a new adventure. I would point out another good Tenchi Author, Mike (Zorch) Haney. He has 2 excellent epics that are a great read one more dark and action packed, while th other is more romantic and comedic. Roas Atredes is also an excellent author. Read their stories on TMFFA and maybe their stories can give you some new inspiration. I'll be updateing some of my stories this weekend, so keep an eye out! And, as always "KEEP ON WRITING!

dennisud