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Reviews for: Broken Fairytales
Iridescent Twilight
2009-12-08 . chapter 5
Wow. This fic, so far, is amazing. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of it. I feel so bad for Glitch >.< and poor Cain...Thanks for the cool read, hope to see more soon :)
LestatsLittleGirl
2009-12-07 . chapter 5
OMG This Story Is Addicting... Need ah!
K
2009-11-01 . chapter 5
The darkness makes it more interesting! There's so much in this story...you've built up an entire new world. I'm so happy you updated. I hope there's lots of DG in the next chapter though.
Amputation
2009-11-01 . chapter 5
Addicted. Addicted, I tell you! Addicted to the disturbing and grotesque intrique of this story. Argh. Please update soon. :D

- Amputation
Rissy James
2009-10-31 . chapter 5
I read this first thing this morning, but I'm only getting a chance to review now.

This chapter kind of scared me a little, which was part of the intent. I loved the interaction between Cain and Glitch before they've realized that they know each other.

I hope you write more soon, you've got me hooked.
Sakura Scout
2009-10-31 . chapter 5
Happy Halloween indeed.

I was expecting Glitch to be raped at some point in this story, so I'm not surprised about that. The fact that Wyatt had to come across the scene after the first guy had his way ... Gosh ... I knew I was going to be saddened and uncomfortable, but this is just heart-wrenching. Seeing a kid who reminds you of your dead/missing son be victimized like that is too brutal. Then you find out that it's actually him ... Gosh ...

And why was Shoe there in the hospital anyway? I'd like to know that, but I'll have to wait 'till the next installment.

Now that that's out of the way ... OH MY GOSH!! IT'S PRESET!WYATT!! The way you described him makes me think of him right after he was released from his tin suit prison, not as dirty. I was really looking forward to seeing Wyatt shank someone with his broken beer bottle, but I guess that'll have to wait for a later time, right? *nudge nudge*

And we can't forget DG. Will Wyatt claim to be dad-without-an-insurance-plan? I hope so, but what about the money?

Geeze. This chapter is going to be haunting me the most out of all of the chapters you written thus far for this story. But really, thanks for this; I couldn't have gotten anything better to get me into the gloomy, horrific, mentally scarring Halloween spirit. Hope to see the next chapter out before Thanksgiving.
Kaylee
2009-10-17 . chapter 4
I've never reviewed a story before... but I felt the need to start with this one. This story is amazing... please keep going. I can't believe its not getting more reviews.
Amputation
2009-10-16 . chapter 4
Me again. Fantastic AU story. Deeply disturbing and yet so captivating. I love it. Please keep writing.

I also noticed your lack of reviews for this story, so ... here's another for you! :D

- Amputation
Rissy James
2009-10-14 . chapter 4
Oh, this chapter made my stomach hurt... but in a "oh god, this is gut-wrenchingly good" way. I'm quite interested in finding out what exactly happened with the Cains (mini-series canon has me worried about Adora). Please write more soon!
Rissy James
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
Oh, I'm hopelessly addicted. In fact, my brain makes satisfied slurpy noises when I read. I'm going to continue on, but wanted to drop you a line to tell you that I'm late to the party, but I'm here!
Sakura Scout
2009-10-14 . chapter 4
Yup. This definitely cleared things up. And there's a flashback hinting how Ambrose got roped into Zero's business. Awesome, though I feel bad about Adora and Jeb. Gosh. That must have been terrible for Ambrose. Still, gotta love the juxtaposition of 'worst day ever' and 'best day of my life.'
Sakura Scout
2009-10-11 . chapter 2
This AU is definitely a new Tin Man fav of mine. Glitch as a junkie is interesting and I'm dying to know how he got to be like that. Well, that and why DG is mute. Oh! And I'm loving the flashbacks. The Cain&Ambrose moments are priceless, though not as nearly adorable as the Glitch&DG ones.

I can't wait for the next installment!
Kay Seda
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
Ooh, oh,, dark intriguing premise is dark and intriguing! I'm a sucker for AUs and this one looks to have plenty of interesting twists. Poor Glitch! And poor little...I'm assuming DG! *pets them, scampers to next chapter*
angela11550
2009-10-09 . chapter 2
it's wonderful I LoVe it
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