| Reviews for Piece it Together |
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ohitsyaoi 5/14/12 . chapter 1I love it! I like the way you said: AND THEN THEY STARTED MAKING OUT. Keep writing! :) |
rainbow spell 2/1/12 . chapter 1loved it as usual :D |
another.creative.lover 11/23/11 . chapter 1I thought the first line was an amazing way to start the story. Amazing. (laughs) That sounds like it's going to happen to me. Dropping out of med school... or well, it sounded like what my hope was a year ago before I found out that I wouldn't like it. This was an interesting fanfic. :) Pieces scattered around; in the end, they coalesce into this beautiful future for them. My favorite line was when Sakura ran to him crying because people called her weird looking and she asked Sasuke if she looked weird: "Yeah," he says, very seriously, "but I'll beat them up anyway." THAT'S WHAT TRUE LOVE DOES! *_* |
therentyoupay 8/15/11 . chapter 1Love this! I also really, REALLY like the idea of Sasuke playing lacrosse. He WOULD, woudln't he? And this is my favorite line: He moves to steady her, but she has already righted herself. |
Dawnaven 5/18/11 . chapter 1This is great :) I like how you incorporated italic sentences and flashbacks. _ Really nice. |
crystalwolfberri 9/23/10 . chapter 1XD love the ending! ;D adorable story! such cute little flashbacks, too, interesting way to write. :) |
Scarlet Hour 3/13/10 . chapter 1Well, I was intrigued by this story from the summary because I thought it was a really interesting and poignant theme. I really liked the way everything sort of drew together, with the childhood of hopes versus the realities of growing up. It was a really nice story; you write SasuSaku well in general, of course. -Scarlet |
Deploringly 3/2/10 . chapter 1Really gewd. Yu make like some of tha best one shots EVAR. |
jetblacksakura 3/1/10 . chapter 1I enjoyed reading this. |
animeice335 2/21/10 . chapter 1I liked this. It was simple yet sweet. |
Tommyboy1331 1/3/10 . chapter 1Ah! So cute! |
hana chan 11/22/09 . chapter 1 They're so adorable...I love it when sakura asked sasuke if she looks weird and he said “Yeah...but I’ll beat them up anyway.” So sweet! I love reading your stories it makes me happy and fall in love with pairing over and over again (smiles stupidly) |
The Disappeared 10/29/09 . chapter 1Teehee! My favorite part was, “Yeah,” he says, very seriously, “but I’ll beat them up anyway.” It amused me! :) Great job! Keep writing! |
sonia 10/24/09 . chapter 1 Short but to the point and very well thought and written... But the making out part, just crack me up! Thanks! |
the general girl 10/15/09 . chapter 1Aw, just the right piece of sweet to make my day a little brighter. :] It's interesting that Sakura dropped med school for Sasuke, that prick better appreciate it. xD And yeah; all the story ideas that I have are really angsty, but crack's been done to death in this area. if we do do something (like in the summer. xD crap that's such a long way off) it should be...different, bigger, GRANDER, more MAJESTIC, the mos piece of collab anything spawned from our respective corners (your''s much bigger than mine xD) of the universe. ...Any ideas along that line? xD |