| Reviews for Piece it Together |
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dJk'.'DJBlossom 10/13/09 . chapter 1So right! The ending was so surprising my face went into shock and awe... |
precarious mind 10/12/09 . chapter 1AW. Such a sweet story. Sorry for the late review. I was upstate since Friday afternoon and I just got home a couple hours ago. And now I have a bijillion e-mails to go through. -_- BUT I DO LOVE THIS ONESHOT. |
Ayake Rin 10/11/09 . chapter 1Man! I love your writing! Darn you! So unfair how awesom eyou can make a few hundred or a few thousand words sound! x3 You rock so much! Always Faithful -Ayake Rin |
EWHH its Kenna 10/11/09 . chapter 1I love you. |
libra gal 10/11/09 . chapter 1I adore the author's note! Is it going to be a constant for your one shots now? XD Sakura dropping out of med school is really random though. This fic is more light hearted compared to the previous few one shots which is a nice change. But I do love the more dramatic one shots ) |
kcas 10/11/09 . chapter 1wow, this turned really good, not just oky...i don't know if it would be good or bad to be continued, that's your call...it's full of emotion as it is, i don't know what other than a big fight/split up you could add to add more emotion...so, anyway, in our faces :)) |
Strawberry Raindrops 10/10/09 . chapter 1"AND THEN THEY STARTED MAKING OUT" that made me laugh. XD anyways nice, nice, nice. :) |
albaloo 10/10/09 . chapter 1I had a heart attack when I read the first line. I can't imagine ever dropping out of school (I'm from a culture that's obsessed with education). That first line was genious though, small but packs a powerful punch. It shows how strong you are as a writer. My hat goes off to you |
TheSecretNotebook 10/10/09 . chapter 1wow, they like making out xD but i thought it was adorable anyways -as usual |
bloocheeze 10/10/09 . chapter 1Of course they started making out. They're Sasuke and Sakura. They can't keep their faces unglued for FIVE seconds- Yeah. Okay. Short and sweet and stuff. Pleasant read and all that, but you know... COUGHkirianCOUGH PoT, yes/yes? Oh, yes. I am so smooth and subtle. Like Naruto. :D Anyway... Nice deliverance as usual and cutsie and fluffy. (That making out line always makes me grin. :3... ) Yeah. :COUGH:POT!SFUTS!(thats an acronym, btw)YES?:COUGH: Subtle, yeah. |
kiuna'yukina 10/10/09 . chapter 1Aww, that is so... adorable. :3 This was a new tangent, and it fit, sorta. |
ribbons-paws 10/10/09 . chapter 1Cute! :) |
SaraChan1225 10/9/09 . chapter 1I thought it was really cute, Good Job!*gives cookies and plushie* |
The Angel Of Ruin 10/9/09 . chapter 1love it please make another chappie! |
Unsawr 10/9/09 . chapter 1 Oh I love the 'lil childhood flashbacks, and how it corresponds to each present scene. Like even if this is not a full-blown story, the flashbacks are enough to show the development of these characters and the bonds of their relationship to the very present day. Ah, Sasuke's blunt as ever, but we all love that about him. I really like what he said to her when she was being bullied, he always knows how to make a girl feel better- hah, nice save. 'Cause most guys wouldn't be able to get away that easily for admitting a girl's flaws. Very cute story overall [: |