I really enjoyed this story exciting from begining to end. This was a really exciting ending chapter. I loved How Skittles distracted the ghost, Coiley's reasoning about Fluey's name to trick the ghost was clever too. The boys really had to run for their lives, (well Fluey was being carryed) to get away from that horrible Beauregarde, who was inadvertatly helping to bring about his own downfall, with the firey distructon of the park. It's a good thing Dixie Belle was there too, to help, recognizing that the effects of that shot the ghost gave Fluey, were deadly and telling Coiley and Multi, to get him to the doctors right away and with her diary, history could be corrected. Terrific Job!

Seems like it's out of the frying pan and into the fire for The Impossibles. And those needles and Pins are really getting painfully sharp. Fluey escaped the shadow creatures, but discovered the horrible secret, that history was twisted, by reading Dixie Belle's diary. Beauregarde isn't what the history book, or the people at Peach Pit made him out to be. Being a EXPERT Hypnotist, he could have made the people of his time believe he was a hero when really he was a no good glory grabber, serial murderer AND wife stealer, (Well, he tryed to steal her)So with it in the written record, it's what the people in Peach pit believe. I hope The ghost of Dixie and her friendly ghosts, (OK Bad Pun, but I'm worried about poor Fluey and it slipped out)who helped Multi, Coiley and Skittles, can help them defeat this Southern ethereal horror. Unconsious and helpless, Fluey really needs help from anyone who can provide it and QUICK, PLEASE! Terrific exciting chapter, I eagerly await the next one. Till next time.

Geez, can things get any worse? Coiley and Multi stuck at the top of a ricketty farris wheel, WITHOUT their powers. Skittles be chased by CREEPY shadow creatures. Fluey still stuck in the Haunted Plantation House, at the mercy of that horrible Ghost. What will happen next? This dastardly ectoplasmic horror, made Fluey, destroy his only means of defence, while in the trance. He holds the cards right now, I hope someone will materialize, to help our heroes. They need someone on their side, against that evil southern spirit. Ouch, those Pins and Needles, So sharp! So suspenceful, Great Job, this story would make a great exciting episode. Can't wait for the next chapter. Till next time.

THE Most EXCITING Suspenseful Chapter YET! WOW! The Haunted Masion references, are abounding in this story, Cool! They found Fluey's transformer and comunicator in ruins, AND now he's been pulled by Ghostly Arms, into The Haunted Plantation House and just when Multi and Coiley had released him from his trance. Clever of them to use their guitars that way...With that gate between them and the entrence to the Plantation house, HOW will Multi, Coiley and Skittles rescue Fluey? What a Cliffhanger, I'm really getting MEGA chills and those Pins and Needles are REALLY sharpening up. Terrific Job! Till next time.

This was a terrific and eerily, "The Haunted Mansion" esq. chapter, with the gate opening by itself and the ghostly wind warning Multi and Coiley to leave. Poor Fluey, mezmerized by the spooky music and disapearing into a thick fog,(Shudder)I can feel those chills creeping up on me again. Great Job on this chapter. I'll certainly be on pins and needles and shivering with anticipation, until the next one comes along.

Terrific start, to what promises to be another great story. I love all the names for the amusement parks, Poor Fluey, with the whole town of Peach Pit, (Great name btw) upset beacuse he's related to (in the town's opinion) a not so illustrious ancestor, who was Civil War General. The Impossible will be running into a Big Mystery I'll bet! Great Job! Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter to come along.