Your writing is beautiful. The story thus far is amazing. This chapter was very moving. I love the connection between Bella and Edward and can't wait to see it developed further. Did you post two chapters today? I favorite this story a few weeks ago but only received an update notice today for two new chapters. I'm just asking because I don't want to miss any updates accidentally.

Quite a sweet chapter, I love Bella's hesistancy (and then the realization) in this chapter

Wow, for such a mucked up morning, it's a wicked shame she didn't at least get sex out of it! :)

Poor babies, will the world ever turn their way?

PS Go Bella's Dog! Bite him next time, and his little pest Mikey too!

im in love with this story : )

Such a funny scene with Ronald and the dog!

Wow, way to romance a gal, international sex symbol. Tip - never fall asleep on a woman! (unless it's after hot, monkey sex for hours - then it's expected, with snuggling) I loved the humor, it makes everything more human and real. Thanks for this!

heey !

nice work ! I'm loving the story so far ! It is getting so original and different from anything I've read !

bye !

i love the humor in this chapter! :-)

good ol' alice always excited even if she's supposed to be pissed off at being woken up in the middle of the night :-)

and could edward be anymore awkward and adorable?

Oh, this is fun! Just found it and certainly hope you update quickly. Can't wait to see what happens when he wakes in the morning...they need to set up another date SOON! And bet it was his agent calling...wondering why he didn't show up at some club or something.

Edward passing out on the couch was beyond adorable.

I loved all of the details in this chapter, you certainly know quite a bit about composition and theory!

great chapter :p

can't wait for more edward!

love the story

Wow, can stories get any better?

i'm completely sold on this story :-)