My heart got heavier and heavier with each chapter and I was finally in tears by the end. Heartrending. You are an EXCELLENT writer and conveyed so much emotion in this story. Amazing. I can't wait to read the sequel.

damn good ending. hurts the heart a bit, but damn good ending.

yours truly

-theflannelclub

good chapter

good first chapter

I love love your writing and this really hit my emotions hard. It just felt so complete. Like it was completely over for them. It was so bittersweet. I really would love to see an epilogue or a sequel. I just want to know that they ended up okay, it would be awesome if their paths crossed and they started over together. One could only hope.

Great story! Great job. Now you have to update and finish You've Got To Hide it is my most favorite of all Spashley on this site!

the idea that ashley actually smiled after saying what seemed like a final goodbye to spencer, is just too depressing a thought. maybe i'm a selfish person, but i like to believe that neither can ever be really happy without the other, and that's why they always end up back together, even if one of them doesn't something really bad, and it seems impossible to forgive.

i don't know if this ending was supposed to be depressing, i'm thinking not, but it sure as hell was. for me. super depressing.

i don't know if i want more or i'm ok with the story ending where it did. all i know for sure is that your writing makes me feel. it makes me feel all sorts of emotions. heavy. hopeful. wistful. just about ready to break into tears. thoughtful. and probably 59 other emotions. your words just. make. me. feel.

and it's a good thing. a very good thing.

Sexy, sexy, sexy.

I heard that in a song somewhere...

Anyway, it's a fantastic way to come back to my computer. Thank you very much for having a chapter waiting for my return. :)

And a sexy chapter to boot! I mean, yes, incredibly... I can't think of the word. It's that feeling you get in your stomach and it's that reaction you have where you want to swallow but can't, you know? So, yeah, it's that but it's also full of that raw animal passion.

You feel the passion and then the repercussions hit you when you're done reading, exactly like I would imagine them coming to Ashley. So Bravo!

I really enjoy your writing. I gotta go find more to read. I love this fic!

amazing! it's very jotty (not a real world but i feel like the format resembles a poem by e dickinson a bird came down the walk)

so post more!

How could there only be 4 reviews for your story? It's breathtaking, painfully heartfelt, and just...beautifully sad. I'm loving your style and the honesty that flows from your words. I'll be keeping up, that's for sure. I hope more people do the same. But not as much as I hope you post the next chappy soon. Thank you. :)

Beautiful and sad at the same time. (

Spencer's going to come to regret this, isn't she?

Or maybe she's just kidding herself in thinking it doesn't fix anything? I'm impatiently waiting for more (even though that makes me a huge hypocrite).

And I definitely meant to say such, not suck. I have no idea how that even happened, lol.

I can't believe this story only has one review! I think it's because you have suck a unique writing style..

Keep going!

damn, you're talented. and I'm sure you hear that alot with all the 200 stories you've written, but seriously, damn. so talented. continue soon plz?.