I really, really enjoyed this story. I would love to see another one like it or you could expand this one? I just liked it a lot.

that was sweet!

I think you did a great job with this and I would honestly love to see it as a story. :)

Wow. To be honest, I didn't think I was going to like this, but I really did. You managed to make the Iceman tender, but still stay true to his character, I think. I'm impressed. (But, personally, I like it as a one-shot.)

I have just read your story 'Brad's Return' and just had to let you know how much I loved it.

Wouls love if you could expand on it a little and see where their relationship goes.

omg so good... please write more

Uhm, yeah you gotta do a story out of this!

I was so scared that the language and point of view and all would ruin things (might be cause I personally have a problem with first-person-writing) but this I really liked.

Would be happy to read something more in depth and kind of outdrawn when it comes to the memories from when they were young to present time.

Good work!

/Tilly

i really really love this! Please keep going

beautiful!

I like this! Hope you continue it soon :D

great. loved the end