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Reviews for: Reaching Out
Tyler0Brousseau
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
hey i really liked this. sounds good so far. will there be more?
Lara-Van
2009-10-09 . chapter 1
This is really good. You know, when you think about it, it's just SO rare that these people actually just sit down and TALK to each other. They're always so busy Saving The World that talking and laughing and just having a good time sort of falls by the wayside.

I enjoyed this a great deal. I just have one small comment to make: You mentioned something about the past "two years." I know it's pedantic, but the fact is, when you do the math, in the Heroes-verse it's only been about eight or nine months since Kirby Plaza, meaning ten or eleven months since they all first discovered their powers on the day of the eclipse. Really, it isn't even November of 2007 yet!

And after that long and mostly pointless rant, that's the only flaw I could find in this entire thing and that's MINISCULE.
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