Wonderful, simply wonderful story. Great job!

Speechless - do you know how hard it is to get this Aussie to the point of non-speechification? Yet you did it .. well done!
I am such a are times I actually have to remind myself that Im reading; that the story isnt just playing in my work is THAT seamless.
Thankyou ... I truly mean that!

Just discovered this story and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

aahhhhhh...the perfect destination after a thrilling but bumpy ride down the road.

and it turns out, everything they were looking for really WAS in their own back yard!

what is it fanfic writers and fans say, "squeeeeeeee!" thanks, it was lots of fun!

"Some call me Tim." now that was a line i was totally not expecting.

TEAMWORK! YA GOTTA HAVE TEAM-WORK! how does the rest of the song go?

i've always thought of jack as dorothy's scarecrow, because of him continually

(and strategically) being accused of being stooo-pid. but now that i read it in this

context, the tinman makes as much, or more, sense!

with so much talk of pronouns, prepositions can't be too far behind. bastards.

and not that i'd ever dare to question jack's reasoning, but why of all questions,

would he ask about where kansas is?

i would SOOO love to hear jack o'neill whistle any tune. anything. even a wolfcall.

in the words of that great orator, Homer, "D'OH. Daniel!" well, i guess it took me as long as him to figure it out, too. and poor jack, for getting into such a compromising

situation that he has to call up a naked maybourne to divert his hopeless brain...eewwww! onward to the next exciting chapter!

aahhhh..SO true, that 'sometimes the words' come 'out of jack's mouth before he

even had a chance to hear them in his head' and a big reason why we love his smarmy

little self so much. and can't i admit how many times that happens to ME in the heat of battle, except my words never come out sounding quite so...appropriate?

way ta go jack! you DO have your moments!

poor jack. just what he needed. more reason to break his vow of chastity.

thank GOD for that yo-yo.

yes, LOVE the last two lines of this.

took me a sec to get the full meaning of jack wanting to get sent to his room -

figured he just wanted a time out - then i got hit by a clue bus. he'd get

a SPANKING before being sent to his room, d'oh. as the saying goes, bad boy,

good man. and yes, i don't know how carter puts up with the carping, it must

be like being on a permanent road trip with hope and crosby. maybe she should

bring along earplugs.