 i.m. nell 2009-12-21 . chapter 24I thoroughly enjoyed your clever story and captivating descriptions and dialogue of our favorites, SG-1. And Sam's and Jack's budding romance was tender, sweet , and hopeful. |
 hedwiggins 2009-12-15 . chapter 25Well done! I love this story. |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 25a nice ending but a little confusing. altogether and enjoyable story |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 23of course jack just had to say it |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 20jack bantering with the oracle was quite entertaining |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 19I really loved this part: And he drew her to him in the exact same way. He would do things that surprised her, delighted her, and sometimes scared her—and she loved that sense of unpredictability. |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 7loved the sidearm comment. did sam know what she was doing to jack? |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 5i have to admit the jaffa saying duh shocked me a bit lol |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 4loved the "Even Sha’re did that to me, and believe me, it translates exactly the same way in Abydonian.” women thing. i laughed my head off |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 3kind of like sgc wizard of oz. |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 2weirder and weirder |
 elleelle 2009-12-11 . chapter 1woah. a very interesting beginning. |
 pain in the mikta 2009-11-30 . chapter 7The side-arm!
That's good! LOL! |
 pain in the mikta 2009-11-30 . chapter 4That one had me smiling till it hurt!
I mean, the pretentious line and chosing eleven!
I love your Jack voice! |
 pain in the mikta 2009-11-30 . chapter 3*snicker* Luv it! |