I thoroughly enjoyed your clever story and captivating descriptions and dialogue of our favorites, SG-1. And Sam's and Jack's budding romance was tender, sweet , and hopeful.

Well done! I love this story.

a nice ending but a little confusing. altogether and enjoyable story

of course jack just had to say it

jack bantering with the oracle was quite entertaining

I really loved this part: And he drew her to him in the exact same way. He would do things that surprised her, delighted her, and sometimes scared her—and she loved that sense of unpredictability.

loved the sidearm comment. did sam know what she was doing to jack?

i have to admit the jaffa saying duh shocked me a bit lol

loved the "Even Sha’re did that to me, and believe me, it translates exactly the same way in Abydonian.” women thing. i laughed my head off

kind of like sgc wizard of oz.

weirder and weirder

woah. a very interesting beginning.

The side-arm!
That's good! LOL!

That one had me smiling till it hurt!
I mean, the pretentious line and chosing eleven!
I love your Jack voice!

*snicker* Luv it!