OMG you should so totally continue this, it has real potential;) and yes there should have been more of Barb on afterlife

Great fan fic and you dont need an excuse lol

Well that was good a little sad but good. More of barbara please as this a great start.

You kept THIS quiet!

Oh, really, medication and alcohol make no odds, here. That was beautiful, it really was.

So few words and yet the whole thing was just right except for one teeny problem ... IT STOPPED!

Oh, come on, where is the rest?!

I have yet to read any Afterlife FFs (indeed, I may even write one after I have finished my current WW Magnus Opus!), but heck, that was just like watching the show ... which I miss ... *sniff*

I loved the last line. Oh, I want some more!

Brilliant, hun!

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... and then? AND THEN?!

*calms down*

Seriously, that was so sad and lovely. I love the image of him kissing back with 'compliance,' as if he's so used to being directed by her that he automatically follows her lead. Poor lonely people. *sob*

I've always thought that scene needed a continuation/alternate look. I'm so glad you wrote this!